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for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

by MPB

person Angelfire
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful I need more...love this story
person Jayn
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I just love the way you described their relationship!! ^_^ I can never get enough of your writing style. This story is one of my favorites by far! PLEASE update soon!!
person yanic
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There's more!! I thought that it was over and now there's more! Excellent!
person HHS
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW.
person Daeomae
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see that the two mates are blossoming in their love for each other. It seems that their bouts of 10 years in each realm is working well. However, those Dunedain maids had better watch themselves in their pawing of the Elf-Knight. They may draw back bloody stumps. *giggles* This is another beautifully written chapter, full of love and passion. *hugs*

PLEASE ask your muse to give us a bit more insight into how Elladan and Galvreth are really doing together. *puppy dog eyes* I've come to care as much about their relationship as that of Legolas and Elrohir. *smiles*

*Mwah*
Dae
person Daeomae
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was such a sweet and sexy chapter, Eresse! I like the thought of the two refusing to be separated from one another, instead choosing to undertake the defense of their respective realms together one decade at a time. *smiles* I look forward to their arrival back at the Last Homely House and to seeing how Elladan and Galvreth are fairing together as well. Excellent update!!


*Mwah*
Dae
person Shanna
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Eresse. Me ha encantado, eres única escribiendo escenas de amor, son maravillosas. Espero que tengas un Feliz Año Nuevo. Saludos.
person yanic
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh what a lovely Christmas gift, thank you! I wish that I could think of more to say but my mind is too full of naked elves so you'll have to excuse me!
person Blaise
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love that you turned Legolas into an equally insatiable match for Elrohir. It seems the Peredhels aren't the only ones with libidos in overdrive! And Elrohir's dry-witted yet happy acceptance of this irony was perfect. Addressing the emotional scars of Elrohir's near rape by Nimaras (the orc spawn) during the couple's first reversal of roles was realistic and well handled. That Elrohir would still be troubled by the incident would indeed be true. It was heartwarming to see Legolas understand and respond so caringly and determined to make Elrohir's first time be about assuring Elrohir's pleasure. These last few chapters has really illustrated how Legolas has matured. Of course, I love the continued reference to "poor Galvreth" and his Peredhel experience :)

End of Part One?! Does this mean that your story will continue? I'm rejoicing...doing a little happy dance. I was already steeling myself for the end of this wonderful tale and a lengthy wait until your next endeavor. I can't wait to see what happens next...angst? ...physical/emotional?...the return of Nimaras?...the usual turmoil or marital woes( (we can't forget Legolas' self-confessed jealousy)?.. not to mention that little trinket called the One Ring? Can't wait to see where you lead Legolas, Elrohir and me next!
person HHS
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SHAZAAM!!!