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i Love this story to no end! please continue with writing! :)

Your are an amazing writer! I think I have read most of your fanfic and you have trully a great imagination and taste for writing. thank you for all of these stories. They bring so much warmth and dreams to mind. thank you for being so generous. I love the Elladan you have created. thumbs up!

Great Chapter!! So touching!!!!

o gosh an update! Loved it as usual, I'm glad to see that things are progressing for both sets of lovers.

Re Chapter 28: This is probably an unworthy thought, but when I was reading about the rescue of Legolas and Galvreth, all I could think about was what an awesome stud Legolas is. I mean, he's just been through a terrifying experience, he's seriously injured and in pain, and he realizes that his injuries could cripple him permanently, but his first thought is to get into the fray as much as possible and protect his brother from further harm. If I wasn't already in love with him, this would do it. ;)

Wonderful! I enjoy reading about, er...I forget his name again! (lol, actually I read this days ago, buuuuuuttt, never got around to reviewing until now. sowie) Galvreth! I enjoy reading about Galvreth and Elladan just as much as I do Elrohir and Legolas! I would like to see how Elladan would react and what he would do if he finds another in his place. I would like to see what Galvreth would do in his hopelessness. While being the virtuous lover is fun, it can also be a bit boring, I think. Elladan needs to know what he is forgoing! Hooray for 'Roh for setting the record straight on his happily married and more sedate (sniggers) lifestyle. I think its interesting that Elladan would actually resent Legolas in this fic. From the very start, he wasn't as enamored of our golden prince as his younger brother was. Its a refreshing change from the friendship they shared in your epic.

On the past chapter, lol. It was enjoyable, but I'm glad that the plot more a bit more in this chapter. THe last one is reminiscent of scenes in past stories, like the garden scene in one of G&I (order rt?). And is that the closest I'm going to get to a romantic, cooked by my lover meal? Lol. Now be more creative! Also, there was this story from I&G (is that rt now? lol) in which you mentioned that the triumvirate went so far as to help the twins' mother in the kitchen after her attack. I think that that would have been a worthy thing to expand on, another Twilight Tale episode. Imagine, the twins and Legolas trying to roll the dough, mashing berries for filling, flour all over the flour and our *virile warrior* elves. LOL. Or should I be going, yummy?

Re chapter 26: So it's Elladan who needs a kick in the head this time. I hope he gets it! Those two would make a nice couple.

But at the same time, I'm worried about Legolas being without Elrohir for a long time. In your previous stories, he had some really awful separations to live through -- like near the end of Hallowed Fate/Sacred Bond and of course in Aduial in G & I. Oh, dear. Will that sort of thing happen again? Poor baby. *wrings hands*

I know that they don't have a commitment to each other but,why did Elladan never bedded anyone else?

Grrrrr, I just want to ring Elladan's pretty neck for him one good time. *huff* He's potentially throwing away the one I'm convinced he's meant to be with. He just can't see past his blasted lofty ideas of independence to understand that he could be blessed with what his twin and Legolas share, rather than weighed down by it. I certainly hope that he smartens up and soon dear. It's a wonderful written chapter, when you can manage to get my blood pressure up so with it. *wink* Bravo, Eresse dear!!!

*Mwah*
Dae

Poor Elladan! He is really confused on the concept of marriage. Please update soon!!