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for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

by MPB

person Yanic
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well someone certainly know's their ME history! I loved the swimming lesson with the twins. Can't wait to read the next chapter
person Shanna
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Eresse. This story is very interesting. It is very good...
person Sesshyangel
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do you know how ***long*** its been since u last updated? I've read, reread and read the previous chapter a third time! This chapter almost makes up for it. If it had been just a *lil'* bit long....
Is envy the sole reason for Legolas' brothers' ill treatment of him? I mean, I love children, so its somewhat hard for me to fathom their behavior. Do they also blame him for their mother's death? That perhaps if he was never born, she'd still be alive and well? ....Or is it because I'm a girl?
person Gingitsune
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another chapter!! I love your writing!! An betrothal between the two? Yeah! I loved the way that Elrohir is so pretective yet willing to spend time with Legolas. Initially when Thranduil wanted to talk to Elrond and Celebrían, I thought that he just wanted to send Legolas to foster at Rivendell. =) Of course Legolas would be a great beauty! That goes without saying *waves Legolas plushie* More onegai?
person Karen
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Little Legolas is just so sweet and I can imagine how he felt when the twins wanted to include him in their fun. I just love this Eresse!
person ramie
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! I like this story! Please write some more soon!!
person Jayn
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KUTE!!! I luv lil Legolas... Don't like his brothers though. PLEASE update soon!
person Sesshyangel
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What makes your stories such a pleasure to read, what is a telling difference from all those other Roh/las fics, is Elrohir's unrelenting acceptance of any pain or hardship bestowed upon him on Legolas' behalf. He'd do anything, sacrifice anything for him! I love that devotion, be it out of friendship or otherwise. Also, he has such a sense of justice, and he's not afraid to stand up for it!
person Karen
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated Eresse, I truly can't wait for more!
person Shanna
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eresse, you write of wonder...