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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So the Ring may try to disrupt the quest by distracting Legolas and Aragorn with feelings for each other? Now there's an unusual concept. Yet in the context of this story, it works.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Re Chapter 41:
I'm really impressed with your explanation of why Elrond kept Aragorn and Arwen apart. It makes more sense than any of the other explanations I've ever read in fanfiction.
And of course, your intimate scenes are great, as always.
I think there's a minor typo, though, in the paragraph that starts with "As their pleasure mounted." The second time you use the word "groan," I think you intended "groin."
I'm really impressed with your explanation of why Elrond kept Aragorn and Arwen apart. It makes more sense than any of the other explanations I've ever read in fanfiction.
And of course, your intimate scenes are great, as always.
I think there's a minor typo, though, in the paragraph that starts with "As their pleasure mounted." The second time you use the word "groan," I think you intended "groin."
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sad!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O boy, poor Legolas really has set Estel a flame has he not? I don't think it's over yet even if he is very well set back in his place. I loved the fact that Elrohir thought about thanking his foster-brother for making Legolas want him even more ;)
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see this story being continued here. I loved the chapter that you wrote in the form of letters.
As for the attraction that Estel feels for Legolas and the way that Legolas feels in response to it, I have to worry that it may return and distract them during the War of the Ring. Of course, at that point it would be as unwelcome to Aragorn as it already is to Legolas, but still, it could be a problem for them.
As for the attraction that Estel feels for Legolas and the way that Legolas feels in response to it, I have to worry that it may return and distract them during the War of the Ring. Of course, at that point it would be as unwelcome to Aragorn as it already is to Legolas, but still, it could be a problem for them.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful as always
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished this story so far, and I can't wait for the rest of it.
I loved the last chapter, it was a very clever way to move through the ages and speed up the story a bit.
Please don't take to long in putting up more of this story.
I loved the last chapter, it was a very clever way to move through the ages and speed up the story a bit.
Please don't take to long in putting up more of this story.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I miss reading this.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! I go away for a few weeks, come back and there are a trillion new chapters to read! Excellent! I'm so glad thing worked out for our star-crossed lovers. But now I can't help but wonder how Elrohir is going to handle Legolas leaving with the fellowship...
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Increadable as always.