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for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

by MPB

person Sesshyangel@aol.com
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL. What a kid! I' hate to be in such a position, queried like that by one only a fraction of my age!! LOL. Glad your utilizing Legolas' age to the max. What better way to get to know Elrohir than to have him interrogate by Lil'las? Who could resist, or accuse him of an ulterior, unseeming motive?

Just to let you know, this fic has thus far not left me unsatisfied, or without a beeming smile on my face. It leaves me with a good, warm feeling. And i love it.
person * i n c o h e r e n t *
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this! you were the one who's converted me into an Elrohir/Legolas fan! please have more soon!
person Shanna
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Eresse. How beautiful! I have liked much the chapter...
person Karen
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THis chapter was sweet and amusing. Thanks for the update, Eresse. Can't wait for more and more than 20 chapters! *dances around happily*
person Anon
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am in love. I am in love twice.
I want marry Elrohir and adopt little Legolas!
person Lisn
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww!! I LUV THIS FIC!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
drop dead... I am in the high heaven of cuteness.
person Sesshyangel
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh! that is just so cute! LOL what he says at the end!

I lllloooveee the scene where Elrohir bends down to kiss him to seal the betrothal! You know how kids pucker up when waiting for a kiss. LOL that must have been so cute! Do you know anyone who can draw that?
Will this be a pretty lenghty fic? You said that you'll skip around a bit, I just want to get an idea of how fast we'll reach the end. If I remember correctly, the length of your stories greatly varies.
person Tanya G
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Legolas is so cute... and Elrohir is so nice to him. His brothers are kinda bastards though... hmm... I am very much enjoying your story .. please update soon..
person Jayn
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I luv lil Legolas!! How KUTE!! ^_^ PLEASE update soon!!