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Hola Eresse. Wonderful! The good is amazing that you write! I do not know if the review is written correctly, the English is not my first language, you understand Spanish? Saludos.

OMG! you are such a tease! what happened to my next chapter, ch 9?!

You are an amazing writer Eresse, you don't just write a story, you write it so...beautifully.
I'm very curious how this story will come out.
You can be sure I'll follow it to its end.

cheers / Soda

Hola Eresse. The story is extraordinary. Very interesting and written well. I am wishing to read more! Saludos.

I love how the elves of Mirkwood and the elves of Imladris have different cultures. It's a really nice touch. Poor Elrohir needs to get laid!

A few more years and the lil Legolas won't be lil any more! *cough* Ignore that remark.... *Grins* I like ... i'm bad with names, and brothers whose name starts with a G, well, I like him now! Picking on lil kids is NOT cool. PLEASE update soon!!! ^_^

I love how Legolas has a jealous streak, and how he totally misinterprets Elrohir's teasing comment on his nurse's comely looks. I can't wait til he grows up and all the trouble starts! LOL. As much as I love fluff, I have got to have the plot! Will we be seeing a double bonding here?

I just realized after writing that review that there were six brothers....sigh. Thank you for clarifying all that. Hmm... I rather like reviewing a couple of days after I originally read it. Makes the wait seem...shorter. Really, the wait is killing me. I know they say patience is a virtue. How unfortunate that its one that I do not possess.

your story is simply fantastic! i love the emotions and issues faced by the characters. i can't wait for more!

Next time you write a fic, could you leave out a brother or two? Five is an awful *lot* to remember. I can't recall who wants the Elf-knight for himself and which brother wants Elladan. Its awwwwful! LOL. I'm sitting here trying to figure this out like a crossword puzzle (no good at that; couldn't even finish this one from a *teen* magazine! I mean, who knew you needed that high an IQ??!). I don't even know their age!

What *exactly* did you mean by Thranduil expectations/full intent behind the betrothal? Do you mean that he wanted Legolas to love (or feel something akin to that) Elrohir enough so that he would refuse any overtures from other, perhaps less well-meaning elves? Is that what you meant by "the letter"? LOL. I love your choice of diction (all those archaic words do set the mood/tone right), your creative ways of phrasing things, your broad vocabulary--all of it helps to avoid repitition n monotony and enriches the story, its just sometimes I get a tad bit confuse. ::sheepish grin::


And what of thranduil's comment on the Peredhil's tendency to chose a mortal end? Is that foreshadowing Elladan's choice of mate?



Also! You seemed to have misplaced all your fluff!! Did you try checking under the bed? I have plenty, just ask if you need any! ;D

I like him. He's actually a pretty decent guy if you get him away from his brothers. And lil Legolas is getting a backbone against his brothers! I luv the way he did it too! PLEASE update soon!