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for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

by MPB

person Yanic
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for an update! And now there is a ray of hope, but will Legolas stop being so stubborn about it? I just want to smack Legolas and tell him to take Elrohir back already. I ahte seeing both of them in pain. As usual a beautiful chapter and I can't wait for more!
person Gingitsune
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elrohir! I only hope that Legolas can regain his heart after he realises how vicious he had been to his beloved elf knight. Always love reading your stories. Heartache, happiness, with doses of reality. Totally absorbing!
person Shanna
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Eresse. ¡Qué emocionante e interesante! ¡Ay Legolas! Está muy dolido con Elrohir y eso le impide ver lo mucho que le ama. Pobre Elrohir. Me encanta y estoy deseando leer más... Un saludo Eresse.
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for Aelluin!! He has now become my favorite brother!! Only in my most desperate hopes have I allowed myself to think that perhaps Nimaras took full advantage of a totally unconscious Elrohir or even dared to think that he just planted evidence to make it look like that something had occurred. Of course, you can still squelch my hopes and reveal that Aelluin is totally off-base and everything occurred as Nimaras (or demon-filth as I like to refer to him) told. I can understand Legolas' need to strike out at Elrohir but to tell something so devastating as that he turned around and slept with others must be destroying poor Elrohir (at least we know that he really hasn't). I wouldn't have waited until morning to leave if I was Elrohir. I hope the brothers get to the truth and then some really satisfying consequences (involving humiliation and bloodshed) are levied on Nimaras (warg spit that he is!). Can you tell I really hate Nimaras? Such great writing to instill such a hostile reaction to a character. I can't wait to read next chapter!
person Blaise
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to add my name to the above Anon review...I was so incessed by that Nimaras!!! Sheesh.
person Twistedpixie
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to start by saying that I love your work. So often when people write fan fiction they mutilate the orginal story and completely neglect the authors intent. The fact that your work doesn't is part of what makes it so enjoyable. The other imortant part is superb style. But he important part is to add that this particular tale is lovely. Even if it takes you years to reach the true end of it, there will be fans eagerly awaiting every single word. So thank you for using your gift of words to entertain.
person Karen
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am in tears! I am worried about Legolas and Elrohir, they are so heartbroken by what has happened. Please update soon so we can know what will happen.
person Blaise
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Nimaras!!! If only the Orcs and killed and dismembered him! Or better yet, if only his brothers had turned on him and put his head on a stake! I knew that weasel remembered and was just waiting for the "opportune moment". Poor Legolas...Poor Elrohir..poor me...I have to wait to find out if Legolas' love will win out over his pride. I hope it does and we don't have to settle for a Galveth and Elladan betrothal instead. That would make for a great bonus but not the main fete. Please...please..please let Legolas overcome that Thranduillian pride and accept his Elf-Knight back!
person Yanic
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see an update! Thank you for making my day! Poor Elrohir seems to be having a very rough one and Legolas. But, they have to get back together. I mean seeing Legolas with anyone else but Elrohir is painful for me (and to Elrohir no doubt). I know that you just updated, but please update as soon as you can!
person HHS
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap!Well,granted Elrohir was drunk and set-up,but he could have told the truth and confronted Nim about his deception.