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for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

by MPB

person Anon
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it. Why is suddenly Legolas' fault? I note in many of your stories, it is suddenly Legolas' fault and time for him to go beg for the self sacrificing Elrohir's forgiveness.

This doesn't forgive Elrohir for lying. He lied and for many years. An omission is still lying. If anything, Elrohir, NO MATTER WHAT, should be begging for Legolas' fault. If I was Legolas, I wouldn't bother. In the end, Elrohir, STILL LIED.

Legolas shouldn't need to 'win Elrohir's regard'. Your stories are starting to have the same repetitive theme, and most of them revolves around 'Legolas begging for Elrohir's forgiveness'.
person Yanic
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't take the suspense any more! Do they get him to confess that he didn't actually sleep with Elrohir and made it up? Do they get to tell Legolas before it's too late? please update as soon as you can!
person Jayn
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate to say it, but I hope he Did it. Then Elrohir and Legolas can be happy together!! After what happened, I'm really surprised that neither of them faded yet... PLEASE update soon!!
person Nirina Illusier
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...i'm trembling, and my stomach is in knots, and I'm trying really hard not to start crying! This is an amazing story!! May I say, that you are an amazing author. though, I had to keep a dictionary with me at all times becuase I didn't know half of the words that you used ><;;;
person HHS
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If what they're thinking is somewhat true,then a serious crime was commited.
person Jaylen
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely Chapter!! Poor Legolas and Elrohir. Can't wait to see what the brothers do to Nimaras. It's amazing how much they have changed in regards to Legolas. The plot thickens and I am totally enthralled with it. Wonderful as always.
Jaylen
person love4slash
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course I want them to be together (FAST!!!) but I can also understand Legolas. I mean he was betrayed. Even although Elrohir can't remember it which makes his fault alost unexistand, he still lied. I think that's what pains Leggy the most.
person elle
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I haven't read this story in quite a while and thought I lost interest in it. I the new chapters anyway. And you reeled me right back in. :P Now I'm once again anxious for the next update.
person Sesshyangel
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! omgomgomg! WHat happened??! What Happened that night!?!??
I shudder to think of how long I must wait before you next update!!!!
UGHHGGHGHHGHGHGG@!!!
Spasms!!!

Aww, poor Elrohir! I hope he doesn't do anything too drastic, like jump off the side of a cliff. And what exactly did happen that night? WHAT did that bastard do?? I had kept hope that it was Elrohir who did the taking. Though it would have meant that he *did* break his oath to Legolas, at least he retained his virginity, which to me I think would have been a greater blow, a more grevious loss to Legolas, for it can never be taken back, even should they get back together. I think that Legolas prized that highly, perhaps more so than Elrohir's fidelity; that the Elf-knight would surrender for him, ever and only for him as a sign of utmost trust and love...that he would be the 1st and the last... I would rather have Elrohir have done the taking instead of receiving. Their relationship can be repaired, but how does one give their virginity to a second someone?
person jamie
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh... that was hard to read. Angsty and so so sad....

If I know your style well, I expect that things will remain thus for quite a while yet.

And I bet that the tables will be turned on Legolas, wherein he'll be begging for forgiveness from Elrohir who will refuse to let Legolas take his hurtful words back that easily. But to be honest, I'm not really keen on that scenario, as I'm one of those types that can fully understand how Legolas must have felt. His anger, resentment and need to hurt/wound back is hugely understandable in my eyes. But you're the author, and I sense that you're heading towards the 'Legolas is being too unreasonable' track.

Whatever you write, I will continue to read and enjoy!

Till your next update!