AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Return to The Lonely Mountain

by skon

schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Writing reviews for more of your old fics is starting to feel like stalking a ghost. In this case, I'm not sure there's much to say other than that this is another wonderful story. Thank you for posting the link to the complete version, I think I might have gone insane if I couldn't finish it.

I love your Legolas and Gimli! They are so endearing that I wish they could jump out of the fic and move into the house next door. (Although, I don't know about the noise.)

The only thing--I can't help but feel like the reveal with the human OC felt forced, like it came to fast and wasn't set up quite enough. I guess I would have liked Leggy to be more proactive in investigating the jewelry, maybe seeing similar carvings to those he grew up surrounded by in Mirkwood and digging through archives or something.

Thank you, once again! This series made my week!
person ramie
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I had some troubles in accepting the two as a couple or "more than friends" anyway, but you've done a great job convincing me!
Hope to read more of it soon, 'tis very entertaining.

cheers
ramie
person Spirit Melody
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been missing this story! So happy to see an update. Oh... the bond, the light - it's all so beautiful and life affirming! Very uplifting - thanks!
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Legolas is a much nicer elf than I am! **grin** I would've been pulling hair! **snicker**

Another lovely chapter, Sarah.

**hugs**
Min ;)

person Spirit Melody
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... turbulent stuff! I can't wait to see what Gimli's mother is like. I bet she's a bit of battleaxe, though loveable too (maybe?). ;) Great writing!
person jen
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love, love, love you for updating this! Each chapter steals my breath and warms my heart. Thank you and I can't wait for more.
person Spirit Melody
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You portray the love between Legolas and Gimli so beautifully. I really need to know how the talk with goes soon, I'm worried for our lovers! Kudos.
person Love to be Anon
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you and I love your stories! There are so few who appreciate the Legolas and Gimli pairing, let alone appreciate Gimli. All of your stories are completely amazing and I'm anxiously waiting for more.
person takkycat
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is only one word I can think of...wonderful, simply wonderful! Your descriptions were fantastic!! I can't wait to see more of Leggy interation with the other dwarves.
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! Your description of young Bimur made me smile. I am looking forward to the meeting with Gimli's father - probably more than they are! **grin**

**hugs**
Min ;)