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Humm. what an unexpected turn. celeborn's gone bonkers!! he's deffinitely out of character in this fic and haldir's a bit dumb for not finding a really safe way for the girl's trip to rivendell. i mean she just got attacked and they have no idea who the hell really set the evil farie loose. galadriel's even out of character. definitely weird but i do like the main plot that your goin for. it really does get lost at some points especially when i get caught up in the spelling and grammer mistakes. well i'm sleepy and i got other stuff to do so i'll just stop my ranting here. i do look forward to the upcoming chapters.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Write more!!!

okay cant believe that i cnat believe the fairy finally got her damn him lol well right soon later

awesome awesome okay ?? is celeborn like over come by the fairy ????ttyl jossy

haha man i think celeborn just c\screwed up m well i hope that the writing is up intime b4 i leave for holiday later jossy

okay loved that chappy next lol well write more soon later jossy
what will celeborn have to say ??
the evil farie??
his men??
helms deep when he is slew??

DAMN YOU i love this story and u just left it that is so wrong i hope that u write more or i will go nuts later jossy

Oooooooh cliffie NOOOOOOO!!! I'm going to kiiiiiiiiil you!!! *pout*

WOOO!!! Man that was a bloody death, or was it just a dream? hum. anyway ur chapters are getting better. my eyes didnt have to strain that much now that u have paragraphs that are separated with spaces and such. i found less grammer and spelling mistakes too!! im starting to like the shakespearian kinda language in this story but the characters sometimes seem a bit flaky, eapecially the heroine but i guess thats to be expected with a young teenager. i look forward to ur next chapter.

Awwwww!!! Cliffe you suck! Keep writing PLEASE!!!