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for The Music in My Heart

by Sorsha

person MarzBar
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, do I need to reread a bunch of chapters to figure out who the two co-conspirators are? I figured that one of them is Celeborn but did not guess the other. Glad to see Elrond and Seere at least kissing again. (I am a filthy old lady and look forward to smut.) I am now feeling sorry for Lomelinde and hope Glorfindel can help her. More soon please.
person MarzBar
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear! I suspect Lomelinde (sp?) has been seen by Seere. Elrond really needs to get moving since she is so young and it will be hard for her to understand what is going on. I hope Erestor is not going to be too difficult about the courtship. I looik for this story every day. More please.
person Duda
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Write more soon.
person MarzBar
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How good it is that Elrond and Seere have agreed to court. And the revitalizing of the Elven realms for the good of all Middle Earth is good news, too. Now, we wait to find out about the Hordes and what havoc they will wreak. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, besides moving the romance along, will you tell us who Seere is? Would the Valar reincarnate Gil Galad in an elleth? More please.
person MarzBar
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed Glorfindel and Celeborn beginning a matchmaking conspiracy for Elrond and Seere. How will Elrond get through to Seere first? More please.
person MarzBar
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More memories from the past. Who was experiencing this flashback or was it just for background? Will Seere be able to come clean with Elrond about her visions and dreams? Has she a fea that has been returned from the Hall of Mandos for some duty to fulfill now? More please.
person Daeomae
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! Now that is a twist you don't often see, Oropher as Gil-galad's lover. However, it does set up the disaster he encounters in the Battle of the Last Alliance really well. Wonderful creativity in that one dear!! And for the record, I know that sometimes I am not one to review as much as I should , but I am still reading avidly and await updates eagerly. This is a great story!!

Dae
person MarzBar
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now you have poor Seere having to relive some of Elrond's most horrible memories. You're not letting up on this poor elf at all. I'll be waiting for more.
person MarzBar
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a treat to have Estel and Arwen's grandchildren show up for the council. I am glad to see that Elrond has helped Seere with healing her fea. I am, however, waiting for Elrond to make a serious move on Seere. More soon please.