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for The Music in My Heart

by Sorsha

person MarzBar
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting pretty exciting again. I hope Seere can ride again soon. To the Elves, freeing the fear from the Dead Marshes is a big deal. More please.
person Lene
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I need a shower now, that was such a hot scene. Well done. Maybe I should mention that I love chocolate too. Hopefully no one get me giggling when eating chocolate next time.

Lovely rememberence of Gimli. Nice to see he is not forgotten.

Update soon. I'm waiting.
person MarzBar
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the hunks of chocolate covered Elves for our enjoyment. Nice interlude BTW. Looking forward to more. I'm sure you wouldn't dare leave Elrond and Seere out of the fun forever.
person Lene
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A cave with no way out? That is really evil. I hope Seere's uncle gets his punishment. Save his victims please.
person MarzBar
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see you got the evil uncle back into the midst of things. Poor Seere and Elrond and never getting a chance to have some fun together.
person Lene
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm so curious. What is it about this artifact? If so many orks and uruk-hai try to get it, it must be important.

Glorfindel and Haldir are so nice together. I enjoy the development of their relationship. More please!
person MarzBar
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!n That was a complex chapter full of battles. Lovely bits with the arrogant one and the Golden Lord. This is such great story.
person MarzBar
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see our troop is getting closer to the serious evil. WTF does that artifact say and can it help the good guys? More soon please.
person MarzBar
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope the glorious Golden Flower will survive the poisoning. They need to get to the fort and rest a bit. I love this story and look for it every day.
person MarzBar
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEWWW! A vile relic left over from Sauron. I hope the battle goes well for them. More please.