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Serious grief here. I will need to go back and reread some of this (or all) to figure out who belongs to each twin and who is the other set of blue eyes watching Glorfindel. More soon please.

OMG! Why, indeed! Did he want Seere? What will they do now since he must have been involved with the five bad men? More soon please!

More convolutions and elements added to this story! This tale is so, so good. I hope Elrond and Seere manage to get together some time soon. Who is this nasty person/elf that is lurking about and seems to feel that they are owed something. Lots of danger of varying sorts here. More please!

I just read this whole story, so far, today. So many mysteries, enemies and characters in this marvelous plot. I look forward to more, soon please.

I have only read up to chapter four so far, but I am greatly enjoying the story! I like the empty feeling of post-war Imladris and your OCs and plot are interesting. As for concrit - personally I would have written it in the third person rather than the first, to avoid continually changing POVs, but that is only my opinion and certainly does not detract from my enjoyment!

I will try to read the rest soon, keep up the good work! :)

Tux

I am enjoying your story tremendously. It's so enjoyable to read your story with its unique storyline. Your take on the plot and characters is new and refreshing! Can't wait to read more.

I think you are doing a marvelous job with this story so far, first time out or not. Looking forward to the next update, which, I might add, you are also doing great with. I love it when I don't have to wait weeks between updates. Congratulations on the job thus far. :-)

Dae

Hey, I can not believe nobody reviewed here yet. So late me be the first reviewer. As I told you before you story is wonderful. I like the way you keep Elrond in character. In my opinion you come very near to what he really would be like. I hope you understand what I mean, my English writtig skills are not the best and I surly would review more if i knew enought vocabulary.
I didn't find an ubdate this morning, I was rather disapppointed as well as some other lurkers too. Keep to good work comming!