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for The Music in My Heart

by Sorsha

person MarzBar
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter started with terrible suffering for Seere but ended with some hope and the possibility of real joy for her. Thank you so much.
person MarzBar
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Elrond manages to break through to Seere a little at this picnic. Besides the nastiness going on, Seere deserves some good loving. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Elrond took the opportunity to inform Erestor and Celeborn about what happened to Seere. They will be able to concentrate on helping her now and not getting lost in their fury. It is so odd, is it not, that the victim always feels at fault for this kind of crime. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter. I was afraid Seere's secret would be something like that. I understand her pain; it is very difficult to report or try to bring to justice males that behave that way. However, covering it up does no good over the long run. I hope she can learn to forgive herself and let Elrond into her heart and body. More soon please.
person Daeomae
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorsha, I am still continuing to really enjoy this story. I just love the complexity of the characters and your descriptions and eagerly await the next chapter.

Dae
person MarzBar
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good she is waking up. It is about time she and Elrond acknowledge their feelings for one another. The circumstances of their lives are so precarious now, it seems that if they could bond it would strengthen them for their upcoming ordeals. I do love this story and look forward to more.
person fan
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story. It's well written and has great compsition.
person MarzBar
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was so heart stopping. I am so glad they have been found. You still owe us the secret of the bad thing (she imagines) she did and it is getting to be time for her to get together with Elrond. I look for updates every day. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffie there! I cannot remember if you told us before why Seere would think she had something to do with the kin slaying and treachery. If not, please tell us more soon.
person MarzBar
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This update was so heartbreaking. The only lightness I could find was Elrond trying to sneak away from Seere's chaise so nobody would know he was there and how much more he actually wanted. Funny he didn't notice that Seere wasn't fooled. You made me cry and giggle a bit; you are a wonderful writer. I await more.