rate_review Reviews

Phew! I’ve finally caught up! *grumble* Stoopid RL! *grumble* I am really enjoying this story. So glad you didn’t kill off Charika, poor things been through so much. Ah, if only we all had our very own elf to see us through the hard times. *sigh* These mysteries our heroes are trying to untangle have me on the edge of my seat. Oh, and Charika’s “encounter” in Goroth’s chamber gave me the heebie-jeebies. I REALLY need to know what’s keeping the spiders and bugs and dust out of the keep, I mean if it helps with the housework, it can’t be all bad, right?

The mysteries are deepening in this place and Charika is very important to solving them. More please.

YAY for Charika! Interesting about her strategy for protecting her child. I still feel like she is in danger (maybe what Legolas did to heal her) and it seems Helcarin will be necessary to battle the evil. More please.

Yuck! Filthy vampires are back. And it sounds like Helcarin's path is going to be dangerous. More please.

New mystery here: map! And that nasty is tormenting poor Charika again. Good to see her trying to take back some control over her life with the weapons training. More soon please.

What a wonderful chapter! Are we going to have Charika back? She's such a lovely little thing and deserves some happiness. More please.

HEY, Long time no review. sorry. i've been on a business trip to NYC. Man, I expected to get to read aorund 3 new chapters when i got back. what happened? I read ch12 and its not bad, just a bit on the dull side. i enjoyed the teasing of alex about her skills with the bow and that it was a miracle that she didnt get legolas killed. it would be interesting if alex does make legolas's, everyone else that teased her, life miserable for a while for teasing her like that. im so glad that rumil's lover is getting better. she was a sweet character in ur stories, even if her part was small. well i do look forward to ur future updates even if i dont review that often. i have to work more this summer so i dont have much time to do much anymore. if u can could u add a few battle scenes or something bloody into the story?

AHH!!! these last two chapters were absolutely breathtaking!! the scene of alex and legolas at the party was HOT and STEAMMING!!! i really like how u mix happy couples with some unhappy ppl like u have legolas and alex and then u have orophin in that lot; then theres rumil & charika, where their relationship hasn't been the smoothest. i really like vanurion's character. i mean he's sounds like a great leader and is mature. he's not at all arrogant and he cares for his ppl a lot! i really hope that he gets accepted by the valor and all.

really sorry that i havent been updating recently. i've been traveling a lot for work so i havent had time to read and review ur story. i hope to read more soon.

Another trip for some of our Elven friends. Interesting history regarding the Eastern Elves. I hope the Valar can forgive them and let them go home eventually. Will Helcarin help them with their atonement? This is such a wonderful story.

Thanks for the update. Alex and Legolas stories are always such great adventures which include danger, love, characters and plots. More soon please.