rate_review Reviews

What a nasty dream! YUCK! I hope somebody figures out Legolas is possessed before Goroth gets a chance to do the kind of damage he enjoys.

Has Goroth been found out now? How will they be able to get Goroth out of Legolas' body? Pretty scary for Alexandra. More please.

OMG! I am glad Charika's protector told her and Glorfindel about Legolas. Is there an Elven equivalent of an exorcism? The castle is a pretty spooky place. More please.

HEY!!! How u been? Still haven't gotten my computer fixed but i'm just goin to use the one at school. Finally read all the chapters that i've missed and LOVE the direction that its goin. I admit that the beginning of the story was somewhat lagging but as the story progressed its getting obvious that things are getting more complex and interesting. I also love a good... ghostly?... story. I absolutely love the parts where the ghost brought Charika to the death pit and the mysterious, possible gaurdian, elf/ghost. The part of the death pit was so sad and touching. It added to the twisted persona of Goroth, may he burn in a thousand deaths.

I have to say, the way you ended chapter 21 is just plain torture to me!!! Update soon please!!

Ur devoted reader,
Yue =P

HEY!!! How u been? Still haven't gotten my computer fixed but i'm just goin to use the one at school. Finally read all the chapters that i've missed and LOVE the direction that its goin. I admit that the beginning of the story was somewhat lagging but as the story progressed its getting obvious that things are getting more complex and interesting. I also love a good... ghostly?... story. I absolutely love the parts where the ghost brought Charika to the death pit and the mysterious, possible gaurdian, elf/ghost. The part of the death pit was so sad and touching. It added to the twisted persona of Goroth, may he burn in a thousand deaths.

I have to say, the way you ended chapter 21 is just plain torture to me!!! Update soon please!!

Ur devoted reader,
Yue =P

EEEEK! Has Goroth or Morgoth or some other evil spirit possessed Legolas? More soon please.

So much is happening in the castle. Who is the shadow protecting Charika? Will Orophin be able to maintain his honorable behavior with Alexandra? He is so sweet and he deserves someone of his own. More please.

*shivers* Ooh! I’ve got goose bumps, see? Especially loved the end of this chappie. Looks like we’ve solved one mystery only to come across two more. Who left the diary where Erestor could find it? Who’s watching Rumil & Charika through their mirror? And who left the cigar smoldering in the ashtray? *grins sheepishly* Oops, sorry, been watching too much Young Frankenstein, I guess. Can’t wait to find out what else is going on. Oh, and by the way, any idea where I can find some of that water? I don’t want to be immortal, or anything, I just don’t want to have to dust anymore! *grins*

Will our group be able to banish Goroth's shade to the void? Will they figure out what the other shadow is? Still love this story. More please.

Will our friends be able to clean this place of it's evil and set the poor souls free? Charika is turning out to be so strong and so kind. She deserves a good life now. More soon please.