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for Gifts of the Valar.

by Jodiodi

person aragorndreamer
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Im on chapter 6 and I have to say this story is very interesting. I will keep on reading because I want to know where this stiry is going.
person MarzBar
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Goroth is gone and the ancient elf has become embodied again. However, will you write another adventure for us wherein Lastharos is killed horribly? If you write it, I will read it.
person yue
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ITs finally over!!! Gorgoth is dead!!! Ding dong the elf is dead, the elf is dead, the elf is dead. Ding dong the evil elf IS dead!! It was absolutely fantastic. His death kinda reminded me of the ending for the movie Ghost though. And what a revelation!! The shadowy elf was Gorgoth's first kid!!! That kinda parantage has got to suck. I'm so happy that the gang found out more about Laso-whats-its-name. they could defeat the bastard easier. I look forward to your next story.
person MarzBar
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a chapter. Goroth has been driven out of Legolas and hopefully into the void forever. Now, how will they stop Lastharos? More please.
person yue
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this cliffhanger just screams "I'm asking for a ass kicking but I know you can't find me so haahaa!!" ARGGG... this ending is such a teaser won't you please update SOON?!?!?!
person yue
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this cliffhanger just screams "I'm asking for a ass kicking but I know you can't find me so haahaa!!" ARGGG... this ending is such a teaser won't you please update SOON?!?!?!
person yue
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PS. I'm sooooo happy for Erestor! Way to go. I also love the part when Legolas kills the vampire and thinks that it's telling him something. It's definitely one of the top moments here.
person MarzBar
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffie!! When is somebody going to tell Alexandra about the possession of Legolas by Goroth? Will somebody tell Legolas? This story is getting real scary now. More soon please.
person Dread Lady Freya
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my gosh! Val, this is keeping me on the edge of my seat!! Legolas' dream was SO freaky, and now the vampires attacking and hunting Legolas/Goroth... *shivers* If you update quickly, I'll forgive you for the evil cliffie. *lol*
person yue
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooh. That was some freaky dream, definitely one of the scarest for the person who dreams it. When I first read it I thought that I missed a chapter or two. It's very disterbing to know that while Legolas and Alex are having sex, Gorgoth is there with them and even participating in a way. I look forward to your next review.