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for Ayagoon

by DurOltha

person Trustingfriendship
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aragorn and Legolas are so adorable together; I can just imagine Aragorn not being a morning person and trying to postpone Erestor's lessons:-)
person Lena
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more keep on working your magic!!!!! i love this chap i think this one and the first chap are my most favorite though they all excellent i love the way you have thran and legolas interact you really know how to give a character personality!
person Lena
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh and one more thing your welcome you deserve it!
person nikkiling
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, sounds like someone's in for some trouble....
*grin*
person nikkiling
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I don't know whether I should be concerned or not. I mean, now I'm wondering whether Legolas' lack of affection around others is natural, or brought on by something else!
Interesting chapter!
Oh, and I have started another actually, but thus far it's only posted on my LJ until I get more done. Although I've had so many curious, I should probably go ahead and start it here soon!
person Lena
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more more!!!! this chapter was great and so was the last one!!! please continue i am completely hooked now. i must know what happens next your so good at writing you have your readers on edge all the time!!!! perfect excellent and all the other words of high praise!!! more soon please!!!
person Trustingfriendship
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonder why he does let Aragorn touch him, not that I mind of course;-) Hope Thranduil remembers what he said when he finds out about them; look forward to more:-)
person Aglarien
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an great chapter - I love the way Elrond hugged him so hard when he returned that he turned purple. And the twins with their 'brother' are so adorable!
person Ertia
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew! Wonderful chapter. I liked how smoothly you did the time-lapse. Alot of authors would have tried to spend more time explaining where everyone has been and what they've been doing. I like that you began the story with Aragorn coming home, and then opened this chapter with him coming back home.
Now...what do you suppose I have to do to earn a spanking from Thranduil? I don't really feel like embarrassing poor Legolas for it. Hmmm...this will take some consideration.... :D
person Aglarien
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the next chapter is....where? *Peers through her computer screen at Dark* Get typing, girlfriend!!