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for Ayagoon

by DurOltha

person aglarien
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, I just loved Elrond losing it and slapping thranny silly!
Agie
person Ertia
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! This was alot to come back to after my long weekend! *does happy dance*
Wow, so much happening in so short a time... wish we'd gotten to peek on some of the action, though! I mean, Elrohir and Thran? WHOOO. What an interesting combination.
And I am so loving your Glorfindel more with every moment. And how everyone knew about their *secret* relationship. The only thing I didn't like was Elrond losing control like that. I think he might be unreasonable, but I don't know that he'd slap Thranduil like that. I DID like Thran's (oh yes, we're on "Thran'/'tia" basis now, thanks...) reaction, though. Very controlled and calm. WHEEEE! When do we get more?
*chants*
ayagoon ayagoon ayagoon ayagoon ayagoon
person Frances Rolfe
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have such a delightful way of creating a fun-loving, sexy story. Your interactions among your characters are cute and ingenious. Ordinarily a story where all the guys are hopping into bed with each other don't do much for me, but in your case, they're fun.
Frances
person Lena
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very very good once again all words of high praise, sorry i havent commented in awhile exams are coming up and study study study!!! anyways keep writing its getting really good!
person nikkiling
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm... punishment.... from Thranduil...
I think I may have been a bit naughty myself...
*grin*
Can't wait for the next chapter!
person aglarien
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great two chapters, love. Poor Elrond - everyone knew but but he and Glor. Very cute scene. And Thranny let Elrond slap him! Can't wait for more!
person Aglarien
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just HAD to leave it there, right? *Sighs*
person Lena
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh!!! this is getting exciting cant wait for the next chap keep up the good work!!!
person Aglarien
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! More! Great chapter! Now what does Glorfindel have up his sleeve?
person Aglarien
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter,hon! Loved how Legolas stood up for Aragon to his father.