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for La Dàdiva

by SatIsis

schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grima is such a great character. I'm very curious to see where this goes! Please update, soon! :D
person Dyani
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating. I am somewhat of a Grima fan and would like to see more of a side of him that I feel he has within him—perhaps someone who was tormented as a child, has a dark past, and feels that the only way to survive is to take advantage of others to his own end. But in truth, though considered ugly or dirty, he is really just a man and wants what any other man would: a home, a wife, long life and love. So I really like where your story is going so far. It seems that Grima recognizes true evil through all the glamour of power and is ready to put himself in danger for those who might truly bring him happiness (Éowyn, Théoden and others). I beseech you to write more, and as soon as possible. Perhaps you should look into a beta for an easier read to your story, but if not, I look forward to whatever you put out next. Please hurry. *****!
person Juliette
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're gonna make Grima turn good? I say go for it! Is he gonna get better looking once he gets out from under Saruman's thumb, kinda like Theoden got young-looking again when Gandalf healed him? Please post more soon!

PS--what does your title mean, if anything?