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by latinereget86

person angel
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good for your first story. keep writing more:)
person angel
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far the story is great! i can't wait til orlando finds out about viggo being there, he's going to be so suprised. keep posting!
person Jazzmine1313
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the set up so far. I like the first person voice you use. Please, Please, Please write more!!!!!!

Thanks

Jasmine
person Anatasia
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can't stop now it is getting too good...keep writing...please, please, please