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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, angst. How have I missed angst? That much!
More please, I love it.
Please update ASAP, please... pretty please?
While I'll be waiting, please keep up your PERFECT work that you are doing with your fic.
Sivan
More please, I love it.
Please update ASAP, please... pretty please?
While I'll be waiting, please keep up your PERFECT work that you are doing with your fic.
Sivan
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great... great...just great! please continue soon!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh orli write next chapter soon please
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far and this story line interests me as i like viggo/orli. please continue, i would love to read more. its great, spec for a first fic :)
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the story idea was really good. But... You need to improve your description. If I wouldn't have known the part of the movie when they head out from Lothlorien, I would not have been able to picture the scene in front of me.
And current? What current? The scene was shot in a lake and not at the great river Anduin. (don't know the real name). If you write a real person story you need to consider that, too.
Besides that, I like to read the next chapter. And don't think about this as a flame. Take it to improve your writing.
And current? What current? The scene was shot in a lake and not at the great river Anduin. (don't know the real name). If you write a real person story you need to consider that, too.
Besides that, I like to read the next chapter. And don't think about this as a flame. Take it to improve your writing.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this; It's wonderful! I feel so bad for Orlando, but, man, do I hate Karl! I hope he gets what's coming to him in the end. Please update soon!
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. You got me hooked - Please update soon.