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by Liliana

person Ertia
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh NO! You do not get away with a "What in the Valar could THAT be?" Cliffie! No no no. Thal, you get back here this instant, or I'm calling Glorfindel and getting him to do something wicked to you!
person Iamme
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is intersting!
person Sakistra
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This story is tremendous...the idea of something pure being changed into something evil has been explored, but never, strangely, has anyone experimented with interrupting the process. Your story contains a definate and intriguing slice of originality in that respect.

I'm guessing that the orc-Elf creature was once either Elladan or Elrohir -in which case, he was partially changed into something he absolubtly abhorred!

Anyway...great story, now I'm anxiously waiting for an update...
person kalia
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just gobbled up chapter 5! Really enjoying the vividness of this story, so easy to visualise. I swear, I can smell the moss!
Come on and get the next chapter up. Quick, quick, quick :) x
person nikkiling
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing...one of the twins? Oh, the suspense is killing me!
person Ertia
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! Wonderful imagery. It's so easy to get caught up in his eyes, what he's seeing, the wonder of experiencing things that he must once have known and understood. Yay!
person Ertia
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...I'm not sure I like what I'm beginning to expect... :D CAN'T WAIT for more!
person Crecy
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ireally like the way this is written. I wonder who he is? Hmmm... i hope to find out soon!
person kalia
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bloody hell this is good. currently devouring the second chapter.
person Ertia
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Fabulous imagery there! Horrible and beautiful and really quite disturbing, actually. I'm very intrigued!
And don't sweat the tomato soup. I'll get you back...somehow! :D