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by Liliana

person Dragoneyez
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...... Wonderer has to be one of the best Original Characters I've seen in a long, long, long while.... This story is, in one word, BRILLIANT! I'm definitely looking forward to further updates!
person nikkiling
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love how Wonderer is relearning things... and I can just see the poor elf with the rabbit; I really liked that bit, and could just picture him sitting there with the blood and whatnot dripping from his mouth, trying to figure out what he did wrong. Geart imagery, that!
Not sure when my next chapter will be coming out... in truth I haven't really been feeling very well. Hopefully things will look up soon!
person Jayn
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snickers* I can imagine that! Heh heh. PLEASE Update soon!!
person nikkiling
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An update!!! Yeah!!! I was getting so worried there that you had quit; and was even tempted to break down and find an email to bug you with. *grin* I really love this story thus far, and am eagerly (and very impatiently, I might add) waiting for more. I can't wait to find out who this mysterious creature ends up being, and how they end up helping him.
person Jayn
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really got me wondering on who it is. PLEASE update soon!!!
person Julia
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When the hell are you going to update!!!!!
person Crecy
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got all into it again and then it stops... I hate that... lol .The only ones I can think of whoose name starts with an E is Erestor, Elrohir and Elladan.... I wonder...? Well, Erestor is already there, so its probably not them. And Poor Glory and Erestor and fighting b/c of Celebrian, and Celebrian's capture could be when one or both of the twins were taken.... *Thinks* Oh hell.... Guess I'll just have to stick around to find out what happens next. PLEASE update soon!
person Ertia
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I won't send Glorfindel now. You updated! For your reward I'll send four pounds of fresh lembas. I'll even have Elladan deliver it! :D Want more of this story! Need more of this story! I NEEEED it, I tell you!

okay okay, thats a bit overdramatic, isn't it? Just ummm...update soon, 'kay, 'cause like, yah..that'd be like...good...okay?
person Sharon
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm fascinated by this story! I love the way you are letting the plot slowly emerge with only a few clues so far. I have no idea who he/it/? might have been! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Nikkiling
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tease! *grin*
Another lovely chapter, and I'm struggling to refrain from begging you to hurry up and reveal who the mysterious elf is... All in good time I'm certain......
Argh! I'm on pins and needles here!