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for The Returned

by Liliana

person Jayn
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O He has a name! YAY!! And Family! Happy! ^_^ Happy happy joy joy! lol. Now... What'll happen? PLEASE udpate soon!
person DurOltha
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo!! Erestors brother!

I loved the idea and imagery of the stones, that was cool!

More soon...please...

~DarkDreamer
person Ertia
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I liked chapt 11, but chapt 12 blew me away completely. So evocative, so touching... Erestor's brother. So much suddenly becomes clear - the mysteries you presented in the first two chapters solved in a single paragraph. No wonder Erestor could never forgive Glorfindel if he thought he had sent his brother to his death. Ah, but can Wonderer be saved? I eagerly await your next chapter! :D
person nikkiling
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was completely unexpected! Very interesting... I love it! And I'm so glad they're finally back to Imladris too. I find myself extrememly curious how they will heal him, and if the physical attributes will be perminate or not...
And thanks for Lindir! The chocolate was fabulous and the music sublime! *grin* Nothing goes better together than chocolate and elves; I'm feeling lighter already!
person DurOltha
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you got me...this is a Wonderful story! I could just feel the pain and sadness when he killed the hairs and thought he displeased his companions...Oooo I want more...you have to update soooon my friend!

~DarkDreamer
person mirasaui
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and read straight through 11 hcapters. What an amusing, heart-warming yet tragic tale. I, too, wish to wrap my arms around Wonderer at times. My guess is he is one of the twins, but whether or no, hope he can find help in Imladris. Look forward to your next update.

Mirasaui
person nikkiling
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Bits of memory are coming back! And Glorfindel comforting him after the battle; too sweet!
I loved the phrase "This, was an Uruk-Hai." Very simple, but it punctuated the mood so well! Another wonderful chapter!
And thank you; I am feeling better for the time being. Now I just need to get rid of this dark, angsty mood that I may continue with SOTS! *grin*
person Ertia
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe I managed to fall three chapters behind! But ah, it was fun catching up. This story still intrigues me completely and you place such poignant moments; where Wonderer ceases to be the beast and becomes a being in their eyes, for instance; amongst such amusing moments as his befuddlement with the loincloth! Wonderful!
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is both strangely humorous and absolutely heartbreaking. I cannot wait to see how our 'friend' deals with Imladris, and discover the secret of his identity. Very nicely done!

**hugs**
Min ;)

PS - **poke, poke** Eh-hem. 'Destiny'?
person Jayn
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh. I would luv to know who he was before he was changed. Do we eventually find out? *Crosses Fingers* He's so childlike but I really like him. PLEASE update soon!! ^_^