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by Liliana

person Jayn
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Kute! I wanna see them all together and happy!! PLEASE update soon!!
person Cassandra Rose
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Care to add a few more elves into this twisted web? I do belive Haldir feels most left out of the proceedings!

Finally read this story, and I have to say, I really like the way that you've blended Tolkien's canon with your own plot in such a way that -gasp!- we can tell that they are, in fact, elves!

And man, I think I guessed every elf whose name begins with E... tricksy of you to make it an original character. Very tricksy. You must be watched, precious... *hiss*

Now, go write more before I sic the Watcher in the Water on you!

~Cassie
person Jayn
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute parings! Cute pairings! ^_^ Yay yay yay! But how will he react? Must know more! I LOVE your story! PLEAE update soon!
person DurOltha
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo excelent chapter, history now becomeing known and....Oooo betrothed ay? I cant wait to read his reaction to the knowlage that hes back!

~DarkDreamer
person nikkiling
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Another interesting twist! You're so good at that!
Wonderful chapter... It's always nice to get a bit of background on the character; somehow makes what happened even worse...
Can't wait to see what Legolas will do!
person Ertia
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Thal!
Poor Elrond! Poor Erestor! POOR Legolas! ai! For them all to have their lives torn apart so! I do so love our angsty elves...
When I saw that you'd updated, I just HAD to come read, even if I'm going to be late for work now!

person Jayn
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One question. Is Glorfindel's lover Erestor or Wonderer.I would say his real name, but I can't spell it off the top of my head. lol. I'm glad he's home!! But I'm sad that he is so changed... PLEASE update soon!
person DurOltha
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the whole {Note Yet} denile game Erestor was playing with himself...and I thought it a nice touch that you had Taurnil pat Erandir on the shoulder, that was nice, like a silent assurance...please update soooon....

~DarkDreamer
person Ertia
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You surprise me at every turn! I do love this story.
I'm getting my feet back under me and hope to be writing again seriously soon. :)
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**sniffle** Oh, my...poor Glorfindel, poor Erestor. **sniffle**

I trust you are going to fix this? **grin**

Lovely chapter, sweetie!

**hugs**
Min ;)