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for Eternal

by trekqueen

person yue
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh this is really good. i really like the relationships and how the story is going. thanks for separating the paragraphs and such. the format from the first few chapters was strainning my eyes very badly, especially since i was reading one chpater after an other. ihope to read more from you soon.
person MarzBar
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somewhat of a rotten cliffie you left us with. What are the horrible orcs doing to our fair ladies? More soon please.
person MarzBar
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice picnic. She could, however, distract him from his paper work in other ways. WEG More please.
person MarzBar
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Elrilya will get over her silliness about Glorfindel soon. He is such a lovely elf and she was lucky to get him that night and not somebody less skilled or caring. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Happy to have some yummy Glorfindel smut. Please come back with more soon.
person Michelle
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow! Just when I thought it really couldn't get much better, I find out that it can! Whew...I didn't expect *THAT* to happen. What a great twist! I can't wait to find out how this situation will resolve itself. Ohhhh...did she do this on purpose, or was it really just a coincidence? Ohhhhh...the questions, the questions!

Fantastic job! Both versions of this story are very well done. Very romantic, and very enchanting. :D

Michelle....
person Talasi
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I finally had a spare moment and read chapter 7. *does happy dance* Glory definitely needed that.....and you know how I love elfsmut *evil laugh* I look forward to reading the read. I like the changes you are making.

Talasi
person Ren
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved this, especially this last chapter. Update!! Please!
person MarzBar
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, you got me interested and then . . . . Are you coming back to give us more? It is wonderful to read about the elves from long before the War of the Ring.