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by trekqueen

schedule November 3, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Your story really left an impression on me it’s beautifully written I specialize in comic art and commissions and I’d love to collaborate if you’re open to it! You can find me on Discord: jinxei_gray

person Ren
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An update!! *tears*

Just as wonderful as I expected. That scene between Glorfindel and Elrilya was so sweet! Got me all melty inside ^_^

I love how you expanding upon the idea that Hurin and Huor were so well loved by most (-_-) of the people of Gondolin, and it help forms a reconnect with the books and Tuor's welcome by Turgon and the people of the city.
Who says fanfic is pointless? I say the best writing overall serves to help change your perspective or at least gets you thinking ^_^


And on that note....

Despite as you know, my views on Hurin (-_-) , I was actually quite pleased with how you wrote him and Huor in this chapter. It does do him and his brother's EARLY actions wonderful justice and honor. I'm impressed Trek ^_^
Too bad he's cursed -_-



A wonderful, wonderful chapter ^_^
The Lords have spoken. To War!


(Death to flamers -_-)...I wonder if said person know's who I'm referring to...
person MarzBar
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. The situation with Maeglin seems to be deteriorating and what is up with Ecthelion? More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just got caught up with this story. Why have the humans been sent to Gondolin? More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was heart breaking. Will you tell why Aredhel did what she did? More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear! This does not sound like good news. Will this be the beginning of the downfall of the White City?
person MarzBar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. How long will Turgon have in his beautiful city now?
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so started reading this last night, and I'm on chapter 5 right now. Haha, I laughed when I saw your review, you beat me! Anywayz, I'm loving it so far, addicted actually. I'll drop another line soon and let you know where I'm at. Haldir so lives!!! LOL.
person MarzBar
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely binding. Nice that Glory had to stay apart from his mate for only five years. More story please.
person Ren
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! It's taken me hours but I've finished reading this story up to this point in one sitting. Truly wonderful! I'm enjoying it thoroughly!! AH!!! Probably the best Het fic with Glorfindel I've read. Absolutely LOVE IT!!! More updates, please!!!!! Don't let this one fizzle!