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for Underneath It All

by laeglass

person cas (2 lazy 2 log)
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh. I think I'm in love with this fic. ^_^ Very creative, and it holds my interest. I couldn't stop reading until the very last word. That is an awesome job!!! I hope you update soon, cause I'll definitely be all on it when you do! ~_^ Boromir can fuck off! Arogor doesn't like him anymore. ~devil horns~ I always hate to grasp the fact that men are mortal. It makes the story sad, but gives it more spice to know what will happen. Great work so far! Keep at it! Lovely story! ~two thumbs-up~
person desperate one
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update? It's been too long now.
person koala
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't make us wait too long. I'm dying to know what's gonna happen after the wedding night.
person cami
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I hope you update soon.
person maggieann452
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HIYA. THIS IS AWESOME, CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE. ANY CHANCE OF A HEADSUP EMAIL? PLEASE CONTINUE
person koala
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Legolas was so sweet and innocent on bed.
I love to see what happen the day after their night together.
person Amanda
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I love the story and I'm really anxious to see what you going to do next. I just love your writing! I felt the characters' emotions so easily. Usually I just read a story just looking for smut but when Legolas was feeling so anxious about his wedding night I felt the same anxiety and was nervous about it! ^_^ Anyway, I hope you keep writing cause you really good.
person juju
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! What an adorable story! I love how you managed to make everything sweet rather than disgusting, and how you took your time rather than rushing everything.
person koala bear
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapters! up date soon please!
person Petrez
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! They finally got it on, twice! *Dances happily* Now all you need to do is not take twenty million years to update the next chapter!