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he he... I like this latest chapter (4)... it's somewhat funny... especially the last part! Grr!
Please write more! Soon!!

I'm really enjoying this. I love Orlando and I'm glad he's in a better situation with Vigoo. Also glad that Sean's being nicer. I just hope he's clean and Karl doesn't cause to many problems. Can't wait for more

Yeah, Sean does have a very lovely voice, doesn't he? I could listen to him talk for hours, or even better, read poetry, yeah, that would be wonderful...(gets lost in daydream of cuddling with Sean while he reads romantic poetry out loud to me)

Uh, sorry about that little interlude! This was a good chapter, though I'm worried about Orli's STD test, and how it will turn out. Good to see Sean act nicer, and the background story on Karl was interesting, how he tried to steal not material things from Viggo, but rather his creativity and artistic sensibilities. Please update again soon, I want to know what's going to happen when Viggo meets with Karl again!

I have to ask: who is Karl? I like the whole story so far. You have great writing style and I think you have the characters' personalities down to a pinch. I think Orli and Vig should hug some more though. I always liked hugging!

Good update! Henry is acting much better than I thought he would--maybe he's still fleeing to Mom's, but at least he made an offer to do something with his Dad and Orli later in the week. So it sounds like Mr. Urban is due to show up as Viggo's possibly disgruntled ex-lover? What will that mean for Orli? Please update again soon!

GOD DAMN SON OF A FUCKING BITCH!!! GOD I hate Sean Bean right now! ARGH!!!
I really like the story! It's... well, cute! I just hope that Orli will be accepted eventually... by everyone in Viggo's life!
cheers!

i like this. Keep going. lol u made sean such a jerk. update soon.

Pretty good chapter! Orli was beyond nice to leave that Mark a note--if it was me, I would have taken my stuff and just left. But now it seems like the brown-eyed boy may have gone from the frying pan into the fire, especially if Henry *does* hate him and decides to make his life hell. Well, at least 'Lij was friendly, and that's an ally to help Orli deal with the Sean factor. Please update soon!

great chapter! can't wait to see what happens next. keep writing! :)

Hey, this is a beautiful story. Is it completed or is there more??