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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the trees! And it's wonderful how they protect Legolas.
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"aria" should be "area"......
I love the way that you handled the talking of the trees, nicely done.
I love the way that you handled the talking of the trees, nicely done.
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Poor Legolas. I like the threats the healer made -- they made a nice means for the healer to obtain Legolas' compliance.
Can I make a small suggestion, though? It would make the chapter easier to read if you broke up the dialogue so that only one person is speaking in each paragraph. It might make it easier to know who is saying what. :-) Other than that, I've no complaints! Keep it up!
Can I make a small suggestion, though? It would make the chapter easier to read if you broke up the dialogue so that only one person is speaking in each paragraph. It might make it easier to know who is saying what. :-) Other than that, I've no complaints! Keep it up!
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, very riveting. And thanks for the quick updates!
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chilling and powerful beginning. "Victim" takes on a deep meaning. Deception and abuse and failure of those who you should be able to count on to protect you --- to even see the problem --- is clearly drawn. I was so glad that the healer ended up with a dagger in his throat. Good for Legolas.
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how perfectly horrible! I love it! Poor Legolas... and by his healer too. I'm glad he's dead, but now I'm on the edge of my seat. Update soon! Please!