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for Forbidden Falls

by DurOltha

person Ertia
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. Elladan wants Legolas... Legolas doesn't want healer. This could be messy messy!
person Ertia
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mirduin. Seems like Thranduil's determined to heal him, though. Lets just hope it doesn't go badly for both of them. :) YAY! When do we get more?
person Ertia
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Poor Legolas. Uh..I think maybe Glori needs to talk to him about relationships though! :D
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Tense chapter. Thank goodness Legolas is able to relax somewhat around Elladan!
person Soda
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I really like the way you described the trees and how they protected Legolas. I will follow the progress of this fic closely.. Regards/ Soda
person Ertia
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hoo! Finally all caught up with this one. Wonderful premise for a story! I can't wait to see how it plays out. And brilliant work on Elladan's side, offering his own dagger as a show of trust. Well done. Can't wait for more!
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved Glorfindel's description of Erestor, very funny.
person Jane
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aria; 1. A solo vocal piece with instrumental accompaniment, as in an opera. 2. An air; a melody.

Area: 1. A roughly bounded part of the space on a surface; a region: a farming area; the New York area. 2. A surface, especially an open, unoccupied piece of ground: a landing area; a playing area. Etc....

Hmmm. Ch 4 Eladan furrowed his brow “I do not remember hearing tales of trees moving so much in this aria” (Which literally means- I do not remember hearing tales of trees moving so much in this melody??).......
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another quick update! I was wondering what Legolas would do when he met Elrond. You did well that he didn't show instant acceptance even though Legolas' fear was heart-breaking.
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Glorfindel found Legolas.