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Erintur!!! Loose-mind indeed!!!!! Although, clever by half. If I were Thranduil, I would still clobber him good for it, though!

Very good to see things working out with Glorfindel and his archer. Hmm..someone dares to take a riding crop to Lord Elrond *looks at Elrond, thinks thats not a half-bad idea* ... I'm still suspecting Erestor. *raises one eyebrow at Erestor, who scoffs at me* hmmm....

ALL RIGHT! WHO'S Got Elrond???? At first I thought he had a secret lover...but drugging him? Grrrr! Woe be to the Elf who takes my Elrond... and doesn't call me to come share. Heh, I do like his "couldn't you just leave me a note or something? And really, you'd think Elrond would just mix up a nice tincture that didn't give him a headache and leave it out where he could find it, wouldn't you? Silly Elrond. :)

Hmmm...wonder what's going on with Lord Elrond. I hope it's something good and kinky (there's always hope)! By the way, I'm really enjoying your story, and check everyday for another update. THANKS:)

:) Poor Legolas - so confused. I liked this chapter, and I really like how Legolas has no sense of tact! Poor brother, though, getting asked if he's seeing someone right in front of Ada! lol I'd say I wasn't seeing anyone either, just to escape the third degree!!!!!

Very good so far! I look forward to new chapters daily :)

"matrice" should be 'mattress' or plural 'mattresses'.

Its a great touch how you have Legolas speak in Eldar Tree.
I've never seen anyone else do something so clever.

-Tenar

Hmmm. I'm not sure I like how Glorfindel is pushing Mirduin's boundaries like that. I mean, he was so respecting and patient with Legolas' boundaries, but he seems determined to push Mirduin (am I spelling that right?) I would think he would have more patience and respect.

Hmmm... Why do I think this picnic is a recipe for disaster? As for biting Elrond...is it my turn now? :D

:D See, Elladan good healer. Elladan heal Ertia?
Poor Elladan. Seems he's going to miss getting breakfast after all! Nice work with this chapter, letting Legolas see that Elladan is different from what he expects.

Wheee! TWO chapters one day! Ertia happy! Uh... Okay...we gotta get past this Elder Tree thing, 'cause I'm speaking it now.
Still dying of curiousity about whats going on with Elrond, though! We must have MORE! :)

Hi, I'm enjoying your story. In Chapter 10 you used the word "duin," but it wasn't in your translations at the bottom of the page. Could you define it in the next chapter, please? Also, I would be willing to proofread (beta) for you. I promise a quick turn around time. it would make your story so much easier to read if things were spelled correctly. (e.g., "captain" and not "caption"). Most of your errors are things that the spell check would not catch. I write a lot for work and it's always nice to have a fresh pair of eyes review something before it goes out into the wide world. Anyway, keep the updates coming. You're doing fine on plot and character development.