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for Forbidden Falls

by DurOltha

person Ertia
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*climbing out of ERP box (thats Elven Realms Postal, by the way!)* phew, thanks for paying the ransom demands, but really, I had everything under control. Sort of. :) Yay, Glorfindel's in love! And they'll work through this, I'm sure. But maybe Glori should invest in a catchers mask to protect his face, just in case. Now...where are Legolas and Elladan?
person nikkiling
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw...that was sweet. Even if...well...the broken nose was a nice touch. *grin*
Great chapter! You're such a swift writer, sometimes I have a hard time keeping up. Not that I'm complaining in the least! *grin* Can't wait for your next update!
person Ertia
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erestor! You kinky dog, you! I would never have guessed! And really.. hmbpffhb ghmmpr... fgssrrghs...

*This reveiwer has been gagged and bound. If you would like her returned, please send return postage care of Chief Advisor Erestor: Rivendell:Imladris.*
person Aglarien
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I was so hoping it would be Erestor!!! Thank you, sweetie, you made my day! Loving this story!
*Huggles DarkDreamer for making it Erestor*
person Ertia
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*looks pointedly at Erestor* Hmmm...wonder who's been having our Elrond? Hmmm...who could it be? *Erestor raises one eyebrow and pours me more wine* YAH, like I'm gonna be foolish enough to drink THAT!
Wonderful chapter, and very insightful, actually. Do gotta wonder how Elladan and Legolas are umm holding up...
person Ertia
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...oh dear, how horribly embarrassing for Elrohir! lol And really, rather embarrassing for 'Dan and Legs too, when they come back and discover EVERYONE knows what they've been *up* to! lol
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A 'gauge' is how to judge or rate something. The word you are looking for is "gag". Spellcheckers are nice but I suggest you bother
looking up words you do not know or recognize. If you are dyslexic like myself, get a beta-reader, your storry is too good to spoil.
person Ertia
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAH! I'm BACK!
Hmmm... all very interesting! Now I'm dying of curiousity... still suspect a certain advisor, however! *glances at Erestor across dining room. Erestor shrugs.* Interesting developments with Elladan and Legolas, too. What fun to come back from the weekend to this!
person Aglarian
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just want you to know how much I'm enjoying this - and I'm dying to find out what's going on with Elrond! Bet you can guess who I'm hoping it will be. Great story, as usual, hon.
person Ertia
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hands Elladan some ice for his knuckles* Well done, my darling Peredhal!
Very nice having Mirduin offer his perspective on Legolas' care. Takes a survivor to understand one, I think.