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for Forbidden Falls

by DurOltha

person Ertia
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Eldecar! Nothing like having your lover's son threaten you with a dagger when you're just about to have wild hot sex! Great scene though! It was good to come home to another good chapter. Has anybody seen my jelly bellys?
person Agie
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, sweetie. So sweet of Elcadar to go along with it - the last lines were a hoot!
Hugs,
Agie
person The spelling fairy
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tare (n.) 1. The weight of a container or wrapper that is deducted from the gross weight to obtain net weight. 2. A deduction from gross weight made to allow for the weight of a container. 3. Chemistry. A counterbalance, especially an empty vessel used to counterbalance the weight of a similar container.

priv•et (n.) 1. Any of several shrubs of the genus Ligustrum, especially L. vulgare or L. ovalifolium, having opposite leaves and clusters of white flowers and widely used for hedges. 2. Any of several similar or related plant

The words you should be using are "tear" and "private."
person Ertia
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Dreamer back! Dreamer write good read chapter. *notes Glorfindel's stare*... I mean, yay, another great chapter. Poor Elladan! As if the entire situation weren't embarrassing enough! Can't wait for Legolas' lessons. Hope you're feeling better and that hectic life isn't bogging you down too much. pssst...you don't happen to have any jelly belly's lying around, do you?
person Ertia
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Dreamer sick? Dreamer work. Not write? What Ertia do Dreamer not write for her read? GLORFINDEL! You make Dreamer write! What mean SICK? She elf. Elf not get sick. You make Dreamer write! You make...sdfghe dfoghe,s *ah nuts. not again*

DarkDreamer,
I send my most sincere apologies. Rest assured that Ertia shall not pester you again until either you are feeling better, or until she is capable of speaking in something besides Elder Tree. I have confiscated her caf'e mocha and her Jelly Bellys and she should return to normal soon.
I do hope you are feeling better.
Lord Glorfindel, Seneschal, Imladris

ps- You do have in mind what I hope you have in mind for this delightful scenario including King Thranduil and Guard Eldecar, don't you?
pps- I hear that lemon jelly belly's are excellent for those with the flu.
person Aglarien
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Agie sends Dark lots of tea and chicken soup to get better fast, along with a stuffed bunny to hold*

Get better fast, hon, because I'm pretty sure I know what's coming, and I can't wait!!! Great last 2 chapters.
Love,
Agie
person Ertia
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter for lunch. Love the interactions here! Poor Elrohir. It's a miracle he can even look his Ada in the eye right now. And poor Erestor, too. He's not used to being open about his feelings. Elrond, however, seems to have that all under control. Can't wait to sit on this conversation with Legolas....
We do get to sit on that conversation, don't we? :D
person Brazen1
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I love your stories, have followed them obsessively. I can't wait for the next chapter, legolas is less than subtle isn't he.
By the way, I would love to beta for you if you wanted, it wouldn't take me long to edit them either, I'm a pretty fast reader and I'm free most of the day.

Thanks for the great reading,
B
person Agie
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*ROFLMAO* Elrond and Erestor in the dining room in front of everyone and Erestor having to wipe his mouth off before greeting Elrohir!!!

Great chapter, hon.

Agie
person Ertia
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol
Yes, perhaps Legolas needs to learn some sense of propriety, but then, I think, so does Lord of Imladris and his Chief Councilor! In the DINING ROOM! EEP! It's a wonder poor Elrohir will even be able to eat in there again!