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by DurOltha

person Ertia
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! What fun! Poor Haldir. He's not having such a good day, is he? I think it's about to get better though. At least, I hope so. Haldir and Thran...hmm......
person Kîan
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hihihi.. I love the way this story progresses!! Ch 38 was hilarious, and when I saw ch 39 was up, I devoured it immediately. Very interesting..yum. My favourite pair at the moment is Mirduin and Buffy the Balrog slayer...eh, I mean Glorfindel, but he is buff isn't he?! Anyway, keep it up! lol Kîan
person Ertia
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh! Way to go, Erestor! And ooh...ohhh dear. Haldir has already stirred it up! Poor Haldir - wait until he understands the whole situation...well..if he listens long enough for anyone to tell him. :) Eagerly awaiting the next installment. If you see Glorfindel, tell him he should find better hiding places!
person Ertia
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:) Dear, I don't care HOW you spell it! That was HOTTTTTT. :) If I were Erestor, though, I'd be tempted to call him 'my lord' again just to get the spanking. hee hee. but then, I'm a naughty Elfling...or so Glorfindel has said. I was just looking for my jelly bellies...do you know how hard those are to come by in Imladris?
person Ertia
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol Another great chapter! I think you're writing style has really come to life with this story. Elladan and Legolas' interactions are priceless. Now, what do you suppose our Elrond and Erestor are up to?
person Ertia
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Dreamer! FABULOUS! All three couples figuring things out in their own ways. And if Legolas doesn't ravage Elladan after THAT show (very well described, by the way) I will be most heartily disappointed! :D *sigh* good honorable Glorfindel. The world needs more Elves like him! Isn't he cool? ( pssst...d'ya think if if I keep flattering him he'll give my jelly bellies back?)
person Ertia
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. You've made me cry just thinking of poor little Legolas with no one to hear his secrets. :( Heehee, liked Elladan all confused and uncertain about Legolas not staying in his room. Haldir is gonna cause trouble, isn't he? I love it when Haldir causes trouble!
person Aglarien
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dare we hope that Haldir will finally find a mate when he comes? Let's see, who is left.......
person Ertia
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH! Legolas speak whole sentence good! And Haldir coming! YAY! (Elrond will say yes, I know he will!) Ertia have lesson with smart book elf now. Learn not speak Tree. Then mean Glorfindel give back jelly bellys.
person Nora
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yayyyy....here comes my favorite Marchwarden!!!