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for Forbidden Falls

by DurOltha

person TopazKat
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have loved reading this from beginning to end. Between this and your other story, I am so hooked on your writing. It's so wonderful to see the interactions between the characters being done so well. I hope you plan on doing another story soon.
person MarzBar
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Haldir and Thranduil having fun with toys and without me (drat). And the lovely Legolas overcoming his fears. Don't s'pose we could get a peek at Elrohir and one of his elleths?
person Ertia
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D YAY! Very nicely done indeed! I just adore your Elladan. He's so kind and wise and perfect. Legolas deserves him, I think.
person Ertia
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....borrowing Erestors *toys* hmmm? How very ... interesting. Hee hee... Poor Haldir. He's not likely to really know what he's getting into, is he?
As for Legolas and Elladan - now I can't wait to see how this experiment pans out! Will they need Elrohir's rescue? *staying tuned for more*
OH, Glorfindel, get over it! Nobody is going to torture and rape you just to see if it can be done! What? Is that a challenge? Hmmm...
person Ertia
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D
Heehee. Elrond creepy? Yah, I gues I can see that! And yah.... that sounds very like Elrond, doesn't it? Sit and stare at the twins for an hour while they squirm and panic wondering what he's going to come up with and than changing! I know it'd sure make ME not do whatever it is I did ever again. (did that make any sense?)

Oh, and Marzbar, I think the reason we torture Legolas is that he is the best defined Elf. We have empathy and understand his vulnerabilities, such as they are. I'm afraid being the most popular also leaves him the most open to being abused. *Sorry, Legolas!* I mean, honestly, can you imagine raping Glorfindel? Yah? I'd like to see someone try THAT and survive to tell about it. I don't mind abusing him as long he recovers. :)

*uh...why are Legolas and Glorfindel glaring at me now?*
person MarzBar
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My first compliment to you is that I have read this straight through and I do not prefer slash since I hate to be left out of the smut. My question is why do so many writers want to have the lovely Legolas be raped?
person MarzBar
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the faithful updates. Erestor assisting Thranduil? Gotta love the pictures in my head.
person Frances Rolfe
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do like your story & the way you've interwoven very tough subjects with romance and delightful interplay.
Frances
person Ertia
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Very insightful chapter! It's eerie how accurately you portray one of the thought processes that many survivors go through. And Elladan handled it beautifully! Shame on Elrond for eavesdropping, though. *shakes finger at Elrond* Can't wait to hear his suggestions!
person Ertia
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A lunchtime read! I was bereft yesterday without a lunchtime read. I actually had to *gasp* go clean out my email box instead. This was much much better. And so very clever of Glorfindel, too, I might add.