rate_review Reviews

I think I have fallen in love with Legolas. His Elder Tree talk is so adorable. This is a wonderful story. Now back to reading more.

I cannot believe it was Thranduil!!!!!!!!!!! This is just precious.

This was a very loving story. I'm glad everyone got what they wanted. Even Haldir.

I had a hard time reading the first chapter. It broke my heart. But seeing what happened made me even cry harder. This is a wonderful story so far. Thanks.

this was a warm heartfeld chapter. Nicely done.

hello, me again, still an insane fan of your work and I will continue to follow it! now that I have reviewed a few of your stories, I think I have a good basis to ground more... specific aspects of reviewing. don't be alarmed, I promise to be nice... for the most part... I love the way you write, I really do. every type of sexual play is included in your stories, and I respect and enjoy that fact. the fact that you use more than one couple also keep it interesting, as you have several dramas going on at once, and couples in every stage of relationships. your use of language and story-telling skills are expertly put to work. there are only three things you could improve on: first and formost, you spelling. I kid you not, I must have found at least two pages of spelling errors, and I write small. try a website like dictionary.com if you're not sure, or get a beta reader. if you can't find one, I'm more than willing to help. but I do comgratulate your lack of typos! second, you have a few grammar errors. you might use the wrong word, like except instead of accept, to for too, or there for there. also, you NEVER use apostrophes, so you have cant when it should be can't, or Elronds ring instead of Elrond's ring. also, you leave out a lot of commas. try adding a few more. you also have a very few tense problems like woke instead of awakened. lastly, you need to work on your flow a little bit. the fact that you cut from one couple to the next, or say 'the next day' or whatever makes it a bit choppy. try to eliminate that. overall, however, you did an excellent job with this, and I hope to read more of your excellent work. bye, feel free to email me, even if it's to bitch me out about my harsh review!

Great story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Frances

I was on the edge of my seat waiting for your next chapter. I just love the legolas and erestor fictions. Legolas as strong and silent and Erestor as just this side of bad.

But...that's the end? Uhm...no? Argh! I mean, I suppose all good things must end at some point, and you did tie off all the loose bits, but....well...*sniff*
I guess I should just thank you for writing this wonderfully lovely story and for sharing it and tell you that you have to write another. Soon.
Please? *...attempts her best begging puppy-dog look...*

The End? The END!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!
Just throw me in Thranduils bed and drizzle me with hot wax, why don't you? It would be better than finding that we're at The End!!
*sigh*. I guess I'll just have to take my jelly bellies and go home, now, huh? Will there be a sequel? Or do you have something new and exciting in the works? I certainly hope so! :D