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for Down by the water

by ladyazmodan

schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry i didnt se your sweet fb, this is the only thing i really really hate about AFF that you dont get any fb notice. - but thank you EVER so much! you made my week. :) And yea i like to twist stuff, i mean the brother issue and all. i needed an OC and why not just use one i used before.

<-- runs off to type up another chapter
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! I love that Erestor is scared Elrond is going to reprimand him for asking Elladan to the feast! *laughs* that was a riot!

It's so sweet Erestor wants to stay true to his oath... even if deep down he knows he is free from them. But it's a nice twist, just to add a bit more tension and angst, that Glorfindel is his ex-husband's brother. STill, it would be nice to know when Glorfindel's feeling for our lovely advisor had started.

Thanks for a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm not sure where you're going with this, but be assured I am along for the ride well and truly! Fantastic beginning to a story! Sets up the plot, suggests many issues without giving anything away, speaks of love, lust and everything in between and I can't wait for the rollercoaster ride to begin! Thankyou so much for posting a seemingly inventive story! I hope Glory is able to eventually win Erestor over, but I get the feeling there is much angst to work throught first. GREAT! :)

I can't wait to read more!

Luv Mawgy