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for When Muses Attack!

by Nephthys

person Naira
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My my, he's shocking me with his good behaviour :p

Nice update, give us some more
person Naira
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...yes...anyhow :p

I agree *huggles Legsie* We have to keep the Sweet One save *pets his pretty hair* lol

I do admit he lays things out to you better than his little brother does to me, but hey, Rumil's adorable :p
person MarzBar
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You actually resist the fabulous, beautiful, arrogant, wicked and evil Haldir?? WHY?? I hate to be real clinical but there is no danger of STD's or pregnancy from some "hawt" sex with the March Warden so WHY?? This little taradiddle I am reviewing here is nothing but a big tease. I am reading the other story with him tormenting Ulmo's daughter so I hope we are going to get some more good smut there.
person Naira
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I agree with you! He's quite annoying at times it seems, in an adorable kind of way :p
person Naira
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My my...quite the jealous type *goes off to snuggle with Rumil*

I think...I think you're making him scarier more so than....sexy hahahaha

I'm sowwy! I couldnt resist :P
person Naira
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew

Believe i'm falling back into speechlessness...

Is that a word?
person Lily
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UUHHHH, please update soon (he's so hot when he get's rough!)
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love the insecurity on that one. Isn't it a shame when insecurity comes hand in hand with bone-crushing ego? *sigh*
The constant mention of his devoted fangirls made me think of a poem I read in college.

"All I have to do
is hear his name
and every hair on my body
bristles with desire.

When I see
the moon of his face,
this frame of mine
oozes slick like a moonstone

When he,
as dear to me as breath
steps close enough to me
to stroke my neck
the thought of jealousy
is shattered in my heart..."

I think it's by Amaru, but don't count on it. Anyway, reminds me of Hal :)
Keep the goodness coming!
~ Elerrina Rose
person kathmco
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I firmly believe that they teach them this behavior in muse school. How to Screw Up Your Writer's Life By Never Giving Them A Moment's Peace, 101, right? Sweetie...you've just managed to write every fanfic writer's life...
*SNORT*

Excellent work...and all so true...
person Emmess
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You mean that they're supposed to LEAVE after the story's done? How come no one has bothered to inform MY muses of this? I'm up to my armpits in Elves...everytime I write a story a new one pops in, but they NEVER leave...they just sulk around and fight over the remote.

Very funny...update soon!