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for The Half Breeds

by Avaril

person MarzBar
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read this whole story again. I hope our dark half-breed will be able to tell Celeborn and Haldir about the planned treachery and violence of his former employer. Will Thruanduil sober up enough to get the same message out to Lothlorien? Waiting for more story.
person MarzBar
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GADZ! What a dark story. I keep hoping that our Western elves will come up with a little joy before they are forced to sail. Still reading this and hoping for more.
person Thalionwen
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After reading chapter eight of this incredible story, all I can say is... PLEASE update soon!!!. Asa writer, I have always delved deeply in my character's minds and hearts, for I find the most interest to be in what dwells within.. *You*, have proven masterful at showing the *full* scope of your characters and it makes for a gripping, taut story! Thank you...
person Thalionwen
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just *devoured* the first two chapters of this story and find that I must pause, so I can tell you that you are an incredible writer!. I could go on...and on...and on... But I simply *have* to get back to reading your tale!! :)
person moxie
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...i actually like this story but I'm a little confused. There seems to be a lot going on here; a four different sub-stories. Can you clarify in your next update? Will they ever tie in with one another?
person moxie
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...IU'm very interested in these new elfs. Very interested indeed.
person moxie
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. only two chapters and I'm aleady addicted. more please! more please!
person kathmco
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! I really liked your characterization of Legolas - strong enough to stand up to his father, and yet still kind of sweet and innocent...but, really...no tutus?
snort.