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I can totally see that this is going somewhere deep. I can't quite see where, but I can tell you are about to throw a big one. I love it when authors do that! Keep it coming.

oohh. this is an interesting story. hope to read more soon. there was a weird thing about this though. i thought that high ranking elves lived really high from the ground but it seems as if her talen was very close to it. well. update soon.

I am hooked already. Your first two chapters are very captivating. I am eager to read more. Your use of descriptive language is excellent.

I agree, quite an interesting beginning, very different from most other stories posted here and I will certainly keep a curious eye on this one! :)

As for the translation generator: Well, if you feel like you are not to happy with the one you currently use, maybe you could have a look around at the links section of library of moria or of elves and men, I haven't had time to check them just now, but maybe they have some alternatives you might find you like? Another option would be the more classical LOTR pages and their links section. Let me know if you are interested and I can have a closer look some other time. :)

One link that you should have a look at as it may be helpful is this:

http://www.jrrvf.com/hisweloke/sindar/df20.html (The Sindarin dictionary project)

Hope this helps! :)

hmmmmm interesting beginning. I will be following.