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for The Lady of Battle

by prastine

person gettimus
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a definently one to follow! I like the setting, and the scope of the time that you work in thru the main character. Lothlorien has always been my favorite elvish realm, so thanks for basing the story there!

The flashbacks are a nice touch too. In the one story, you've got two plot lines to follow and I can't wait to see what happens next in each! After reading several other LotR stories and countless other fan fiction stories based on other things, The Lady of Battle is already at the top of the heap.

To the author: keep writing!!! please!!
To any potential readers: READ this one! It'll be well worth the time!

Two thumbs up, five stars, and top marks!!
person MarzBar
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will you continue this? I am so befuddled now. Who is courting her? Will she be able to love somebody? Will we get any smut?
person LOREIN ANGEL
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far... please update soon.
person Myaha
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is looking dark for Haldir. This is the rfirst story I have read which presents Haldir with a little competition. I love Haldir stories, read them alot. But this is a first. Funny thing is, youve got him competing with a character who has yet to present himself. Clever. This story seduces...bravo!
person yue
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh. i really like this fic. the anger, the resentment, the pain, it all rolls out and touches me. this is great!!! update soon!!

PS. poor mysterious lover. i feel sorry for the chap.
person nightengale
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't review much, but I love this story. I love the way your elves don't rattle on like in the other stories. They contain themselves, withholding great big fat emotions. I have always pictured them being like that. I like the plot that is building as well. Im hooked. You update often too. Great! Keep them coming.
person nightengale
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh..and one more thing...WHO is this suitor? And what about yummy and devoted Haldir? Dying here!
person yue
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty interesting. it was sad when u flashed back to the destruction of Gondollin and what happened to her family. and damn that little bit with haldir getting it on by himself was very stimulitive. i hope to read more soon.
person Lesse
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like! I love Haldir stories. This is very sensual. Keep it up. Im interested to see where this is going.
person yue
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh facinating. its really interesting. look forward to the rest of the story. i find it interesting that ur not like other authors taht just have galadriel popping in and out of ppl's heads. lol its cool but this story's different and i like that. update soon.