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for And There Was Trouble Taking Place

by malinrana

person Malinrana
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ertia, if you ever do get that on canvas, *please* send me a picture of it. I'd be very interested in seeing how someone else sees them and, of course, eternally grateful of a picture. Pretty please *bats lashes*
person Ertia
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...Haldir as a first? Is that really a good idea? *Slaps Erestor upside the head.* OF COURSE he's coming on to you! I'd come on to you if I thought you would even notice. *shrugs* Excellent chapter, but, as you said, too short! Short chapters make me sad. *pouts*

daughterofthemidnightmoon : the thing is that Glori doesn't want to be just a flash in the pan 'starter romance'...he wants all of Erestor, heart and soul. Hence, telling him to come him after he's 'sown his wild oats' and is ready to settle down with the best of the best.
person Tanya
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I love your dialogue... its so perfect for the situation. I am very excited to see what happens next.. please update soon
person daughterofthemidnightmoon
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What... I'm totally confused. So does Glorfindel still want Erestor or not? And if he does, why is he basically telling him to go screw as many other people as he can before he comes back to him? I'm so confused!!!! And why did he have to be so mean to Erestor? 'this is the bed you made, and now you must sleep in it'??? Ouch. That almost sounds like a blatant refusal. I can only hope Glorfindel knows what he's doing... I don't know, but if I loved someone, the thought of them running off to someone else's bed would make me sick to my stomach... Like I said, I hope Glorfindel knows what he's doing... All in all though, I'm loving the story and can't wait for me. Do hurry with more! I'm curious about that stone Erestor was holding. Did it somehow boost his latent sexual energy or something like that? :P Or did it jut finally open Glorfindel's eyes to him. And why do I feel as though the appearance of our favorite prince of Mirkwood is somehow going to play a major role in this... hmm... plot bunnies, plot bunnies... hurry with more soon!

-daughterofthemidnightmoon
person Ertia
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OUCH! Glorfindel! How could you crush him like that!!! Ohhh... I am soo gonna punish you for it, just you wait!
:) Ooohhh...I do so love angst with my elves. Hopefully we'll get more soon?
person Ertia
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*singy-song* Glorfindel's in LOOOOVe. Glorfindel's in looooove! Elrond is tooooooo...
and not with me. Darn it. *sits and pouts*.... Hmmm...wonder whats up with the white owls. Tell Glori to back to sleep so we can figure it out. :D
person Sakura
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
& that's exactly where it belongs!!!! Glorfindel/Erestor rocks. So hurry & update, cause I love it1!! ^__^
person melon
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...alway thought erestor would look pretty in pink, lol! o.O update soon okay? this looks really good so far GxE is my favorite LOTR pairing ^-^
person Ertia
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Very nice beginning, indeed. Ah, rose quartz, the heartstone...
"If the last image you had facing death was one of Erestor’s knives before it hit you between the eyes, in the twins’ opinion it was not an ugly way to go."
I simply adore this line. Very nice writing indeed!