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for And There Was Trouble Taking Place

by malinrana

person Ashitakia
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I believe that you meant Elrond. In chapter 11, "Glorfindel picked the letter up off his desk and showed it to Thranduil." I think you meant that he showed it to Elrond, not Thranduil.

The story is amazing and I've fallen in love with it.
person Fimbrethiel
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been patient... now you have no further excuse. *grin* More, R -- please? I'm still dying to know what sort of strange mystical powers that damn stone has. *lol*

Love, me
person Ertia
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah what tangled webs you weave for our dear Elves! So, Erestor has given his pretty blond lovers the boot, eh? Well...if they are ever bored without their lovely dark haired advisor, I know a certain human woman who would be happy to entertain them! :)
Very intriguing. I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Ertia
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It's back! And so very very intriguing. Hmm.. do be careful with your plan, Glorfindel! Don't destroy what trust Erestor has for you... but all so intriguing. Can't wait for more.
person daughterofthemidnightmoon
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... this is getting interesting... I can't wait to read more! Hurry with more soon! I hope Erestor and Glorfindel get together soon!

person Ertia
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeeee! Happy happy joy joy! An Update!
Oooh. but a VERY spooky update! Poor Erestor! I think he's getting a Valar-incited smack-down! Wow. Want More! more more more more.
person Ertia
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
* pulls up chair and sits silently, watching story for a new update*
person Ertia
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I dunno about the choice of song. I think Lindir could have come up with *something* a little better! :)
*shakes head* Oh, dear. Lindir's gone and fallen for Erestor, too. Oh this could wind up getting horribly ugly! :D
person Ertia
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done, once more! I like the decision to make Legolas not Thranduil's birth-son. And I really love how he just bowled entirely over Elrond. *sigh* :) Now, where is that peep-hole into Erestor's bedchamber?
person Ertia
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Valar! Haldir and Legolas at the same time?!?! Erestor is actually going to SURVIVE that? I doubt I would. But I'm always willing to try...
Poor Glori, but then, he made his bed, and now must lie in it. Alone.
Seriously, a fabulous chapter. You painted the picture of Erestor' and Haldir's entrance like a portrait. (Hmmm...wonder if I could get that done on canvas, in nice high-gloss oils?)