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for Fifteen Years

by Ertia

person Thalionwen
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I started out just wanting to read one chapter and see if I liked the story. Ten chapters later... I must say that I am *thoroughly* hooked! Absolutely wonderful story!! And I await the next chapter, eagerly... :)
person Emmess
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tease? Tease doesn't begin to cover it...

Sigh. Let the chanting begin...

"We want sex...we want sex...we want sex..."

*Eyes lascivoius-looking dwarf*

*We want ELF sex...we want ELF sex...we want ELF sex"

Update soon!
person Emmess
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ertia! I know it's been WAY too long between updates! You've got me going through withdrawl...need some hot courtesan action soon...some hot Silvan/courtesan action, if you please...poke...poke...poke...

Kath
person Tuxedo Elf
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, fell behind with my reviews!

Both chapters were lovely, I almost died laughing at Elrohir's trick! I kind of wish he had pulled it off! That would have been very embarassing for Legolas though, if Elrohir had noticed that he was doing it for real!

Felt really bad for Legolas in the last chapter and generally annoyed with Feanal... how totally unforgiving that elf is. I wonder about his past though, I must say! lol you really enjoy your mysteries, don't you?!

Looking forward to more!
Tux
person Emmess
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haldir! Down, boy, down! Back...back I say...step away from the arrows, Haldir. Good Elf. Sit...roll over...beg...yeah...beg some more...

Sorry, Ertia...he tends to get a bit aggressive when I give him his lead. I'll try to keep him on a shorter leash...*snicker*


Great chapter...ooh, Legolas had better think twice from now on...although who in their right mind wouldn't want him is beyond me. *Conks Feanal on the head for being a stupid Elf, and tackles Legolas*
person Soda
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My dear, I would never think you capable of writing a bad chapter.. But it IS very fun teasing you though. Oh! I forgot to tell you I did have a run in with Haldir... Want to know what he said? ;-) love/ Soda
person nikkiling
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was kinda sad. Lovely, but sad. I wonder how he'll make amends...
Hope you enjoy your time in Oregon; The weather here has been quite nice of late....a little TOO nice if you ask me...
*smile* I want my rain back! California is taking it all! *sniff*
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Bored. That's a good joke!

Of course, it would make sense that Legolas would not understand Feanal's position, the poor courtesan, as Legolas has yet to experience it! *secretly wants a Legolas statue for her garden*
person Minuial Nuwing
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I just adore your Glorfindel- so wise, and strong, and gorgeous... **wipes drool off keyboard**

But I would have dearly loved to see Elrohir's joke succeed. **grin**

Elrohir as a courtesan. **melts** Now *that's* a fantasy! **LOL**

**hugs**
Min ;)
person nikkiling
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that was a close one. Now I'm wondering how much Elrond suspects... And Elrohir's little prank was quite amusing!
Wonderful chapter! Yeah! Now they're off to the Golden Wood!