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Hmmm... Should we expect some *very* hot three-way action?... ( not that I'd like that, mind you **wink, wink** ). And I do hope that you decide to explore this very *interesting* tension between Haldir and his courtesan!!. Great chapter! :)

Am I completely off in thinking that somewhere down the line, this might turn into love between Haldir and Leggy?! It seems plausible - they could be good for eachother. Our Marchwarden has been hurt, and so is putting on a harsh exterior and protecting himself... but Leggy is loyal and honest and wouldn't hurt him... And Leggy is used to being promiscuous and not being serious about anyone... and I think Haldir would not settle for anything less than a devoted one-on-one relationship. You did have Galadriel say she hoped Haldir would pick Legolas....

You've got me worried by all this D/s though. Not only with Celeborn but with Haldir too... somehow I just don't picture Legolas being content in either position. He's got enough places in his life where he has to be a leader as prince, and yet with such a strong warrior personality I don't think he'd be happy taking the submissive role permanently. I hope if it gets to that point, that any loving relationships involving him that you might create would be on equal footing (or eventually get there).

Or maybe I'm totally off and there will never be any love for our boys... :(

Now I really want to hear more about Haldir. He sounds so...cruel. *shiver...grin* I hate to say it, but I hope at some point Legolas ends up with him.
Excellent chapter, as always!

Another excelent chapter...I must say, you flesh your characters out well...Great job!
Cant waite for more! :)~

~DarkDreamer

Oh poor Feanal.. Maybe Legolas needs to take his place?? *wink wink*
Nah, it was a great chapter as usual. But I'm still hungry after some spank-legolas-hard action (as usual) *hehe*

I'm having some trouble holding Haldir back, I believe he is checking over his spear... *and what a spear*
You better not piss him off Ertia, he will not be gentle with you! :)))))

love / your ever loyal Soda

Ok. I was visiting your homepage and saw that you had done and "other version" of the latest chapter. With Celeborn & Legolas. I really liked both chapter but since I'm a spank-legolas-fan I reacted strongly about having him spank Celeborn instead (hehe). But I've called Haldir and told him that he could stand down until I say otherwise.
HOWEVER, I've also noticed that you haven't updated "A More Serious Elf" in a waaay to long time... So pay heed, I will soon realese Haldir and his warriors, and believe me when I say that they look forward meeting you...
love / Soda

PS. You know that I love your writing eh? But once again I must say that it's hilarious teasing you! ;-) DS.

Me: "...yeah that's right! You show Legolas who's the boss Celeborn..."

*reads* "..I want you to take me Legolas...!"

Me: "WHAAAAAAT!?!?!?"

Me: "...of all the evil things! ERTIA!!!!!!!!"

*calls Haldir and wardens*

Haldir: "She did WHAT?! I understand your frustation Soda, please rest asure that I will deal with that author! And then she will for sure put Legolas to submission and torture. Wardens! We are going on a author hunt! Bring those nasty looking spears!"

Me: *evil grin, crazy eyes*

WOW! I *so* didn't see that coming! It worked very well though! *Grins* Very very nice smut!
Though the alternate version was very nice too, I must say!

YAY more Rúmil! As long as you're nice to him, I'll take him any way he comes! And you can take *that* any way you like! ;D

Tux - off to read 'a more serious elf'

Oh....Ohhoh....Uh....Oh ya....
Ertia? I...I must say hannon le my friend!
To come home from a 15 hour shift to that!
Hannon le Hannon le Hannon le Hannon le!!!!
*Goes and gets the mop to deal with all the....drool...ya drool defonatly drool*
DarkDreamer

Sexy Celeborn! I can't believe he didn't want to screw Legolas silly. Oh well, this was much more sexier, though, because it was unexpected. :-)

This was the first sex scene in the whole story, so far, wasn't it? I mean, slash scene, then, because there was that scene with Mirie (sp?) and the beginning. I liked this very much. More?

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more? Now?