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by sjansons

person Phairesse
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am sorry about your virus problems...it can be soooooooooooo upsetting to lose work and have to reconstruct.
But, I am glad you did...
This chapter...non-stop action...and so much information...
Yay for Haldir....finally getting over Eowyn and getting the courage to talk to Cyllien.
Yikes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would not want to be standing before that sultan.
I wish Wolfram had drowned...but then we would have been less one villain...
Next reel, please.
person Phairesse
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just sitting here on the edge of my seat...
Poor Eowyn. She tries to do something nice, and it doesn't work.
Pass the popcorn, please. :)
Vi
person Phairesse
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't keep up....gasping for breath....Oh poor Eowyn. Argh!!!!
I would love to see this onscreen. :) :) :)
person Phairesse
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More and more I am impressed with your sense of adventure and fun. You have done such a remarkable job of melding many fantasy ideas and characters. Oh the poor djin
person Phairesse
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You never fail to surprise me...Always pleasantly so...I really want all of the people to be safe..but I don't want the djinn to be in a situation where he has to do something he really doesn't want to do. Hooray for Hentmire...even if it didn't quite work out. she is such a good character...
person shon
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading these stories for the longest time. I must say that they only seem to be getting better and better, not that they weren't great to begin with. Just wanted to let you know that they are worth reading which I guess is the best thing a story can be.
person Phairesse
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...ARGH!!!!!!! Villainy all around...so much trouble
Haldir is in such misery ...
person ViJanaway
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The care you give to research shows in this...And it just makes this tale so much more enjoyable.
Poor Haldir....and stupid Cyllien
I like what Eowyn said about Legolas and Hentimire being like Aunt and Nephew.
This one is a keeper
person Phairesse
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Y'know......Eowyn needs to get a real shield to protect her from all the pitfalls that seem to wait for her.
:) :) :) :) :) :) :)
person Phairesse
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
You just can't let them live happily ever after....:) :) :)
Eowyn ought to wish herself and Legolas to an unkown world somewhere that they can be safe
Carry on.