rate_review Reviews

Perhaps a better use of the warning area would have prevented me from just reading a death fic. No thanks for giving me no choices in what kind of story that I would like to read.

Well, I guess you haven't really made up your mind about what to write?
You tried to tell the readers that Vig is terribly horrified and broken by this man and all of a suden, you try to tell us that he actually enjoys it? After all the pain, physicially and for his abused mind, you really believe a body can decide of his own to enjoy such thing/pleasure? Knowing a lot about the human body, psychology and health care you can all but trust me, it's simply not possible.
You should also get a beta. Stuff like that is important at times, you know?
Besides all that, it was ok...

Really loved that story, hope to read more soon.