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bravo...still crying

I was so happy when I came across your story. Finally, a complex story that takes me more than 15 minutes to read. I absolutely loved it! I liked the fact that you didn't have Legolas and Alex get together too soon; all the more sweeter when they finally did get together. I was so excited for them. Great job! I look forward to more stories from you.

Oh My God This Story was so awsome!!!! By The Time i got to the End I started to cry. I'm not normally a Emotional person but i really loved your story!! I Look forward to reading more of them! :)

This was so very very very well-done...Thoughtful, plauxible, emotional...totally believabe.....The end had me in tears...both kinds.
VERY good end. Thank you.

WOOT! excellent story once again!

I noticed that when u revised that u deleted the part of how she did end up in the M-E dimention. Like the part where she thinks that she passes through a rip in space and that she's part of a starfleet. it's the same as the one in the other category. Please correct that if that was unintended.

Hi. Just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story very much. I especially appreciated your strong heroine. When I first started reading, I didn't know how you were going to pull off an ST/LotR crossover, but you did it masterfully. It's also very clean in terms of grammar and spelling. So many of the stories I try to read are riddled with errors, some beyond bearing. Thank you for sharing your gift and your story. The only constuctive criticisim I might offer is that i would like to know what Alex was wearing on her trip to Lorien, Rivendell and beyond. You might have described her outfit, and I just missed it. I couldn't imagine her wearing a gown, so I picutred her in tunic and leggings. I was also looking for a reason for her failings in archery and hair care -- something to do with her alien influences, perhaps. Regardless, they were charming asides that lent well toward building relationships between the characters; and I'm sure having Legolas fix your hair isn't the worst thing in the world! One other thing, toward the very end... I find it unlikely that Legolas was the only one in Ithillien to have to bury a mate, what with all the deaths among the Elves in the wars. I would think many would understand and even relive their own grief. Of course that would be tempered by the promise of meeting their loved one in Valinor and that is what you meant. All in all, it was a very good story and I hope many others enjoy it as I did.

I loved this story from the beginning to the end. Beautiful!!!

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! THAT WAS THE COOLEST FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ GOOD FUCKIN GODS THAT WAS BAD ASS!!!

WOW!!!! You had me in your grips. I couldn't stop reading. I like how you keep the story moving along. I have not read books by Tolkien all I know by him is through the ring movies. I must admit I am really impressed with how you used each characters and the development of their circumstances. This is the first fan fiction I have read all the way through. Some fan fiction stories did not really do anything for me and I found myself moving on and not completing it but yours was really well written and kept me wanting for more. I hope you are starting another story as a write this review. Hope to read from you soon. You should really make a living doing this kind of thing. I assume that writing is your passion. Hey why not do something you love and get paid for it. Just a thought.